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Title: Hawks Don't Cry 03 Mar 2015 3:59 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter gave me goosebumps! Fantasic! Very well done.

    --his
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 14 Oct 2009 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Bellatrix is in trouble! I'd be running to another country if I were her. Cause Snape is going to kick her butt!

    Aww, poor Harry! I'm so glad Sev talked and now Harry can stop feeling guilty and has someone to turn to.

    Awesome story!

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, she sure is! Sev's coming, run run run!

     

    Harry really needed him.  And Sev came through for him!

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 14 May 2009 7:53 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    Sev is great in this chapter-- very much the adult for Harry (which makes him a great mentor). My only concern is that he become so perfect that Sev. becomes unrecognizable-- always a problem in any AU.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he finally does manage to provide Harry with a much needed hug and comfort here, which the kid needs after the roller coaster of emotion he's been on. 

    And no relationship with Sev and Harry will be perfect, they will still argue and disagree, but Severus is now willing to admit that he cares (loves) for Harry and will be there to help him no matter what, and Harry knows that too. That trust was an important thing to establish and it's what I've been aiming for this entire story. But that doesn't mean their mentor/guardianship will be perfect. But any arguments they have will not be irreversible.

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 13 May 2009 9:29 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    No he can't die! Can he? T__T
    Very long chapter and loved every part of it sad but still loved it. I really liked the end of the chapter Harry isn't holding all his emotions inside. And lastly Beatrix LeStrange you're going down strange lady! lol, keep up the great work!

    Author's Response:

    Uh . . .not since I'm writing the story, no.

    No, Harry has learned to trust Severus like no other, and he's not afraid to let Severus see him cry.

    Heaven help Bellatrix, because Snape is very very angry with her.  Nobody hurts his fledgling!

    Thanks for reviewing! :)

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 13 May 2009 1:47 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    If I were Bella, I'd be digging a hole . . .to China or maybe the ends of the earth.

    Loved the Severus and Harry interaction here. It was perfect. Can't wait to see what Harry says to the Old Meddler.

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, me too! Severus is going to be on the warpath. 

    Thanks and that chapter will be coming up soon!

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 13 May 2009 12:48 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! Sev is being very understanding though. I love how he stood up to Albus.
    BTW: couldn't Sev either legimens Harry or put Harry's ministry fight memory into a penseive to try & find out what spell Bellabitch cast?

    Author's Response:

    Severus will come through when he's needed and he protects Harry like his own.

    Even if he did do that, it wouldn;t help, because the spell is one Bella created herself, and so only she knows the counter.  No, this requires a confrontation with her, which is something I'm looking forward to writing.  But first . . .Harry vs. Dumbledore.

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 11:00 pm
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Run Bella Run.

    Author's Response: Got that right! Run, witch and hide under the bed, because Big Bad Mister Snape is after you! Mwahahahaha!
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 6:30 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, poor Harry. I hope that Sirius will get better. Or maybe he will stay in his dog form forever - whatever if he is happy... Mila

    Author's Response: If Severus can manage to make Bella tell him the counter, Sirius will recover.  Staying in his Animagus form wouldn;t be good, because even as a dog, Sirius is still insane. Cross your fingers and hope Sev comes through!
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 5:10 pm
Reviewer: Aeryun (Signed) [Report This]
    OOHH! Somebody's in trouble! And I can't wait to see what Severus does to Bellatrix! :D

    Author's Response: Yes, two somebodies, in fact! Just wait and see! Severus is going to do something nasty!
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 6:29 am
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    I like fierce protective paternal Sev. I can see that it was hard for him to figure out how to offer Harry the comfort he needed, but in the end he was perfect :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks.  You're right, it was hard for him at first, since he's not used to doing it, but in the end he figured it out.

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