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Reviews For Broken Wings
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Aww, poor Harry! I'm so glad Sev talked and now Harry can stop feeling guilty and has someone to turn to. Awesome story! Author's Response: Oh yes, she sure is! Sev's coming, run run run!
Harry really needed him. And Sev came through for him!
Author's Response: Yes, he finally does manage to provide Harry with a much needed hug and comfort here, which the kid needs after the roller coaster of emotion he's been on. And no relationship with Sev and Harry will be perfect, they will still argue and disagree, but Severus is now willing to admit that he cares (loves) for Harry and will be there to help him no matter what, and Harry knows that too. That trust was an important thing to establish and it's what I've been aiming for this entire story. But that doesn't mean their mentor/guardianship will be perfect. But any arguments they have will not be irreversible.
Very long chapter and loved every part of it sad but still loved it. I really liked the end of the chapter Harry isn't holding all his emotions inside. And lastly Beatrix LeStrange you're going down strange lady! lol, keep up the great work! Author's Response: Uh . . .not since I'm writing the story, no. No, Harry has learned to trust Severus like no other, and he's not afraid to let Severus see him cry. Heaven help Bellatrix, because Snape is very very angry with her. Nobody hurts his fledgling! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Loved the Severus and Harry interaction here. It was perfect. Can't wait to see what Harry says to the Old Meddler. Author's Response: Oh yes, me too! Severus is going to be on the warpath. Thanks and that chapter will be coming up soon!
BTW: couldn't Sev either legimens Harry or put Harry's ministry fight memory into a penseive to try & find out what spell Bellabitch cast? Author's Response: Severus will come through when he's needed and he protects Harry like his own. Even if he did do that, it wouldn;t help, because the spell is one Bella created herself, and so only she knows the counter. No, this requires a confrontation with her, which is something I'm looking forward to writing. But first . . .Harry vs. Dumbledore.
Author's Response: Got that right! Run, witch and hide under the bed, because Big Bad Mister Snape is after you! Mwahahahaha!
Author's Response: If Severus can manage to make Bella tell him the counter, Sirius will recover. Staying in his Animagus form wouldn;t be good, because even as a dog, Sirius is still insane. Cross your fingers and hope Sev comes through!
Author's Response: Yes, two somebodies, in fact! Just wait and see! Severus is going to do something nasty!
Author's Response: Thanks. You're right, it was hard for him at first, since he's not used to doing it, but in the end he figured it out. |
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