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Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 6:28 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't wait for the confrontation between Sev and Bella!!!

    Author's Response: It's coming, trust me!
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 6:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh poor Harry. I really hope that some cure for Sirius can be found, because Harry will never forgive himself.

    I have a feeling that Bella is going to be toast when Sev is finished with her. I love how Severus is so protective of Harry now. Too cute.

    I'm really looking forward to that conversation between Harry and the Headmaster.

    Severus really looks on Harry like a son, doesn't he?

    Nice progression of the relationship. Good work.

    Author's Response:

    No, he won't . . .if Sirius doesn;t recover. 

    Bella will be a smear on the floor if Sev has his way, but I think I need to leave her alive for now, so he might just hurt her a little. 

    Severus has finally come to terms with how he feels about Harry.  He loves the kid like a son, a very new concept for him. 

    You'll be seeing that conversation soon!

    I'm glad you liked the way the relationship progressed, I was almost afraid it was going too fast. 

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 5:53 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesomeness! But so sad... I feel so bad for Harry, the poor guy is just devastated right now over Sirius... I'm glad Severus was there for him and talked Harry through his grief and guilt. He really is a wonderful guardian :) I say he gets an award after all this! *nods*

    I'm wishing him all the luck in finding the cure for Sirius! Hunt that evil b*tch Bellatrix down Severus, and drag the counter-curse out of her twisted head! Ahem, got a little carried away there, lol. I just hate seeing Harry so upset…

    I wonder how the talk with Dumbledore will go, and how they‘ll handle this new prophecy?

    Author's Response:

    Me too, the poor kid never catches a break.  Severus knew that he was needed and managed to put aside his reserve and be there for Harry when he needed him.  Sev would laugh at that, but I agree--he should get an award.

    Yes, yes, he should do that, all right! And he will!

    You'll see, the talk is going to be a . . .bit emotional!

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 5:11 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, poor Harry! I love though that he finally went to Severus and let his mentor comfort him and Sev being all overprotective was the best! Can't wait to see what Harry says to Dumbledore.

    Author's Response: Thanks.  I should have the next chapter posted soon!
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 5:05 am
Reviewer: frostedmidnight (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww, poor Sirius! And poor Harry! I loved the interaction between Sev n Harry, it was very well played out! and now the headmaster is back, though im really not sure if that's a good thing or not...
    ~Frosty

    Author's Response:

    It might not be a good thing for Harry considering what Dumbledore did to him and his parents.  I'm happy you liked the Harry and Sev interaction here, because the next chapter will be only Harry and Dumbledore. 

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 4:29 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    SQUEEEE! Severus is so delightfully sweet here. (don't tell him that I said that;])
    I love Severus and Harry interaction.
    Now, about Sirius. He will not be insane and he will not die. How do I know this? I'm all knowing :P.
    I'm looking forward to Sev's revenge on LeStrange. mwahahahaha

    Author's Response:

    I won't, but I think he knows!

    great, because I was a little iffy on it.

    oh you are, are you?

    We'll see. 

    And the revenge on Bella will be sweet!

Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 3:30 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was hoping that Harry would want Severus to try to help Sirius, but I never thought of him finding Bellatrix. I love it and can't wait for the next post.

    Author's Response: Well, I figured it'd be neat to watch Sev pry info out of a reluctant Bella.  And then maybe hex her and Obliviate her.  And I wouldn't leave Sirius insane, that's too cruel!
Title: Hawks Don't Cry 12 May 2009 2:17 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    So good--I'm glad Severus was able to comfort Harry and has the patience to deal with him during his time of grief. It really makes me happy that Harry has someone to depend on now. You've done a very good job at portraying Harry's sorrow and how much Sev cares. Good work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks, it was hard writing this because I could see how badly Harry felt and I didn;t want Severus to come off as too sappy.  But Harry will always have Severus to depend on now. And he knows it.  Also, Sev is the ONLY one Harry trusts to see him cry.

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