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Reviews For Broken Wings
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Author's Response: Eventually the old man will. Harry needed to tell him the way he felt and now that he did, he can feel better.
hope that u update soon thanx xoxoxo. Author's Response: Sirius may recover once Severus talks to Bellatrix, which should be coming up next chapter! Thanks for your reviews!
Author's Response: Yes, it was. Those things were unpleasant, but they needed to be addressed, and I for one like Harry when he stands up for himself and doesn't just go along with whatever Albus says. I think he made it easy for harry to admire and worship him as a youngster, but now Harry is growing up and starting to learn what's been going on behind the scenes, and not everything is black and white or cut and dried. Dumbledore is not perfect, just as Severus is not, or Sirius, or even Harry. He simply allowed people to think he was.
Great update. Hmmm, are you going to cure Sirius? Author's Response: You're right, we would be in trouble. Ah . . .you'll see in the next chapter, wouldn't want to spoil my surprise.
Author's Response: I know this might seem like a filler chapter, but it's not. Yes, everyone who is reading knows that D made a huge mistake and all and that Severus knows and to a certian extent Harry knows, but Harry needs to tell D the way he feels as Harry, and also needs to tell him that he won't be used that way again. It's an assertion of independence that is necessary for his continued growth as a person. He also needs to tell D about the new prophecy, because Albus has no clue about it. And then Albus can offer some clues and leads about the Horcruxes and some general info on Tom Riddle, the Gaunt mansion, the Riddle House, the orphanage. Dumbeldore knows about those places because he knew Tom from before he was LV, Severus doesn;t know of them because it was before his time as a DE. And lastly, it allows Harry to really drive home to Dumbledore that he really screwed up and should make sure not to do it a third time--the first time he messed up was with Severus. Plus, it gives me a chance to re-do that scene in the office and show a more controlled Harry, totally different from canon.
Author's Response: That's what I was hoping for, since in this story, Harry has matured more than in canon and learned from Severus how to control himself better. And that did go a long way towards showing Albus that he could make sound decisions and act like an adult and not a child.
I love how Albus and Harry cleared the air between them; that was needed! I think that Harry had a lot of resentment built up inside him. I'm glad that Harry finally has someone whom he can trust, and feels saved and cared for. Sev is his rock now. Aw...here come those warm fuzzies again, threatening to take me over....but I don't mind! Author's Response: Whoops! Glad you realized you hadn't reviewed, 'cause I love hearing from you. You're so invigorating! :) Yes, that was a very intense and necessary confrontation and now that everything's out in the open, Harry can have a better relationship with Severus and eventually Dumbledore as well.
Author's Response: It is and if Severus can worm the info out of Bella, Sirius should be cured. Yes, it will take a long time for them to trust Dumbledore again, and the way back will be rocky, but then no penance is ever easy.
Author's Response: He can be very manipulative, can't he? |
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