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Title: Rivalry's End 16 May 2009 1:12 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm dancing the Happy Dance! Siri is healed--Sev and Siri have a truce--Bella is in severe "pain"--and Draco was humiliated in a spectacular fashion. I bow to your genious!

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Aww, thanks! *blushes*

    I had a really hard time deciding what to do for the prank too.  And how Sev should handle Bella, since I didn;t want her to die yet.

    Glad you liked my solutions. :) XD

Title: Rivalry's End 16 May 2009 12:07 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was delightful! I laughed so flipping hard when Draco ran out of the bathroom naked, and it only got worse when Minerva rounded the corner! Omg, good one! Malfoy will never live that one down--he needed to be taken down a few pegs though.

    Yay for Snape finding the cure, even if he did give himself away. My one concern is that Narcissa may have overheard his little tirade, as we don't know where she was during all of this. It would be bad if Lucius found out about what Snape did because he would definitely be the type to seek revenge.

    This chapter is one of my favorites! I look forward to reading more soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he did, and they did it without really hurting anyhting except his pride, and I don;t think he'll ever forget it and who knows, he might even learn something from it. 

    As for Snape giving himself away, he might and he might not have. That remains to be seen.  Because Narcissa might have been out or she could have been lurking around a corner . . .and Lucius would be ready to rip out Sev's guts if he ever knew the truth of how Severus caused him to lose his eye and betrayed all the DE's.

    So happy you liked it! Thanks for reviewing so frequently, I really appreciate it! :)

Title: Rivalry's End 15 May 2009 10:57 pm
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    That Prank was Hilarious!!!!! And I love how Ruthless Sev can be!

    Author's Response:

    Great! I thought it was pretty funny myself, but sometimes people don;t share my weird sense of humor.

    As for Sev, ruthless is an apt description for him when he chooses to be so.

    Thanks for all your reviews too!

Title: Rivalry's End 15 May 2009 10:24 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, the prank was great!
    Jace's gift is really interesting (he's not behaving like a proper Slytherin, though, he could blackmail anyone to leave him alone, or else he will spread their deapest secrets... lol)
    You wrote the Severus/Sirius dialog very nicely, too.
    Mila

    Author's Response:

    Wow, guess my pranking Malfoy was a hit!

    I'm glad you like Jace's little talent, it'll help Sev and Harry someday.  There's a reason why Jace can't use his gift that way, and you'll find out what it is next chapter.

    I loved the Sev & Siri reconciliation thing, their hatred was understandable but not very comfortable to write.  But while they won't be friends they will tolerate each other enough so they won't hex each other on sight.   


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