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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: A Frightened Fledgling 31 May 2009 1:58 pm
Reviewer: Ginny Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey it's pretty good. No offense but so far I prefer the Never Again! Series

    Author's Response: None taken.  BW is a very different story than Never Again, much more dark and angsty with a bit more canon like Snape.  But in its own way I think it is just as good as the other series.  Harry & Sev do bond, but in a slightly different fashion.  But if you're looking for a series similar to NA try either Snowy Encounters or Hidden Away, both are posted on here as well.  Click on my profile here and the series button and it will show you what order to read the stories in.  Oh and have you read the one-shots and short stories in the NA series, they add a bit more depth to the characters and give backstory through Harry's fifth year and also have Eileen in them in Forbidden Flight and Severus's Christmas Wish.
Title: Freedom's Way 29 May 2009 3:46 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    sorry for lack of reviews but my comp has turned into a imbocile and has thrown alot of tantrums

    it was a great fic, i'm so pleased sirius decided to grow up in the end, will malfoy snr get a magical eye like moodys, if he does it won't be good as he will use it for bad things.

    has malfoy somehow cured bellatrix from her guilt, why didn't snape add a poison to the drink instead of a sleeping charm.

    i would love to be a fly on the wall when dumbles confronts the dursleys, that would be a interesting convo

    good luck sev, harry and hedwig

    Author's Response:

    I know what that's like, believe me!

    You'll see what happens to Lucius in the sequel.  I would never give him a magic eye . . .ugh!

    Eventually, that spell, unfortunately, will wear off.  Well, Severus didn't want to get charged for murder and I need Lucius around for book two. 

    Just wait and see, that part's coming in the sequel. 

Title: No Excuse 29 May 2009 1:39 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    sirius needs to grow up, he is an adult now and should know better. i would rather have snape as a guardian than sirius as sev has the mental ability to know when he has done something wrong and say sorry, sirius hasn't the brain power to comprehend that he did something wrong

    Author's Response: That's always been Sirius's biggest problem, he's a 16 year old trapped in a adult's body.  You can tell by the way he reacts to Severus in the books.  And yes, Severus is a better guardian because once he gets over his resentment of Harry, he then takes full responsibility for his wellbeing and loves him like his own son.
Title: Mentor 28 May 2009 10:58 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i would love to see sev tuck harry up in bed. great chapter pleased that sev and harry are apprentice and teacher and at last crabbe has got himself a backbone and standing up to malfoy, i hope he does well with his apprenticeship.

    Author's Response:

    Wouldn;t that be so cute?? Of course, Harry would probably die . . .

    Yes Crabbe has finally found himself and Hagrid will be a good mentor to him.

Title: The Toad At Bay 28 May 2009 9:23 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    umbridge is dead, umbridge is dead, lets party to all hours, but kids drink soft drinks only

    Author's Response: Yeah, you got it! And let's shoot off some fireworks too!
Title: Through A Glass Darkly 28 May 2009 9:03 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    well they had the chat and i'm glad it worked out and that harry will have the help he needs to deal with the toad i hope i havn't insulted the toad population all over the world, if i have i am very sorry.

    sev really has a great friend in harry and together they will succeed

    Author's Response:

    I think the toads will forgive you. *grins*

    Harry will find Severus is a good friend and vice versa.

Title: Severus's Bane 28 May 2009 7:46 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    poor sev and harry, i hope they can solve this as they need each other, come on sev just listen to harry and harry speak with sev

    Author's Response: Yes, all they need is to sit down and just TALK to each other.  Of course, they're both stubborn men so it's not going to happen anytime soon.
Title: Freedom's Flight 26 May 2009 11:14 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great, freedom really enjoyed his freedom excuse the pun, glad he came back after having abit of fun, hagrid really gives great advice and he certainly knows about wild creatures better than sevvy

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he did and he waited long enough for it!

    Well, Hagrid ought to, since he is the gamekeeper and rehabilitated a hawk before.  But it was a learning experience for both of them, Freedom and Sev I mean.

Title: The Best Medicine 26 May 2009 10:47 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    hagrids great at reassuring people and knows how to take care of people and situations, poppy was brilliant aswell

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he is.  I think he's one of those natural caregivers.

    As is Poppy, who is quite aware of what's going on in the school, even though she spends most of her time in the infirmary.

Title: Hawk Speak 26 May 2009 10:15 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter and very amusing, i had images floating by me of the hawk doing potions, flying to and from the potions cabinet and mixing a delightful potion and getting top marks for it, also malfoy the house-elf was great, i think if anyone else gets the same punishment, they should have a elfish name, arn't i mean?

    Author's Response:

    Lol, that would really be funny!

    And that's actually a good idea, now who will misbehave next that we could use it on, hmm?


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