Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Freedom's Way 23 Jun 2010 4:41 am
Reviewer: BreakANew (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is absolutely wonder :) definitely a favorite for the rest of my time. Excellent job XD
Title: An Unruly Potions Class 25 Apr 2010 9:27 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    You definitely captured a classroom of unruly kids quite well and homework really is not a whole lot of fun to grade, even when kids have access to computers...sometimes I wonder why I assign homework at all and yet, I do. Excellent description on all fronts.

    Author's Response: Thanks! It helped that I actually had to go through this! yeah when I was teaching computers weren't a factor yet, because I taught preschool.
Title: Birds of A Feather 23 Apr 2010 7:57 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful; sometimes it really is only a pet/familiar which can help mend a broken heart.

    Author's Response:

    Yes that's absolutely right!

Title: Snaring Darkness 09 Mar 2010 2:52 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I saw where you asked how I liked the prank on Lucy, and I must say I really enjoyed his part and all that was involved. I'm just sorry I didn't tell you before hand. He got his just deserts, I just pitied he and Bella weren't captured then.

    Author's Response: Yeah but I had to save something for the sequel. So I couldn't kill them off just yet.
Title: Freedom's Way 17 Feb 2010 12:18 am
Reviewer: Lyte (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh beautifully done. Loved the characterization and the well thought out reasons for everyone's forms and behaviors throughout. I spent nearly a day and a half reading this story and resented having my reading disrupted for such paltry things as attending work.

    Author's Response: Wow thanks very much! I really appreciate it. I do have a sequel posted called Two Hawks Hunting, which isn't completed yet, but will be in a few weeks!
Title: Snaring Darkness 14 Feb 2010 7:17 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought Voldy's was funny because Gila monsters are so slow, and he can be so mentalyy slow that it was fitting. As for the Goshawk, which subspecies is he? He sounded pure black, but I can't find any that don't have at least a little white on them.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah i wanted it to be something reptilian but not a snake because that would be too obvious.

    Severus/Warrior does have a white breast and is otherwise black, there are some goshawks that are colored that way. 

    How did you like the parts with Sirius, Severus, and Harry?

    And the prank they played on Malfoy? Just wondering. 

Title: An Unruly Potions Class 14 Feb 2010 12:26 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Harry's new little reputaion concerning his eyes

    Author's Response: That is pretty funny. But it makes sense, right?
Title: The Toad At Bay 13 Feb 2010 11:35 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I wikipedia'ed the bronze-beaked bird, very nice touch. Oh, and I absolutely ADORED Moody's reaction to the paperwork!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I love mythology!

    Yeah Moody's something else.

Title: "Nobody Hurts My Wizard!" 13 Feb 2010 8:23 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    That was truly AMAZING! ""Don't touch him, toad bitch! You want to know where Harry Potter is? Well, here I am, and if you want to hurt Severus, you'll have to go through me."" I was cheering so hard! Silently of course, I wouldn't want to wake anyone! Can I give you a 10 to the 10th power rating?

    Author's Response:

    Yes, if you'd like.

    Thanks. I loved sticking it to that awful witch.  Harry was just wonderful here.

Title: Things Fall Apart 13 Feb 2010 8:00 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Shit shit shit

    Author's Response: Yeah you can say that again, LOL!

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