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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Lily's Eyes 13 Feb 2010 6:40 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad it's AU, if my opinion helps any. I love what you're doing.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! When I first posted this, some people complained that I was changing too much, but IMO that's what an  AU is-- a different universe with a different plot and different characters.
Title: Prophecy of Lies 13 Feb 2010 5:33 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved Fawkes. Poor bird, being such a wonderful soul having to live with such a disillusioned one. I'm certain Dumbledore wasn't as bad when Fawkes imprinted on him.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I know what you mean.

    No, Albus wasn't as bad when Fawkes first chose him, but he has since tried to play a game that he has made mistakes at and hasn't been able to correct them. You'll see more of Fawkes later on.

Title: The Best Medicine 12 Feb 2010 5:53 pm
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    About the familiars? Of course Hagrid's right. As for defeating Moldy. I'd like to see Harry do so in the name of Snape while in his hawk form. His retransformation, if he has one, is going to really hurt our Dark Protector. I like your Poppy, everyone makes her out to be a sempering fool and I don't think she could be in her profession.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I agree. Everytime I was sick my cat always made me feel better. That may yet happen.

    Yes, it will, but it has to happen.

    No, neither do I. She's a health care professional and she would know how to deal with crotchety patients and I don't think she would be ignorant of what Severus was doing or how he got the scars and injuries.  She would have to know because nobody just shows up suffering from a Cruciatus Curse multiple times for NO REASON.

    Plus Severus might be willing to trust her over everyone else, except maybe Hagrid, because of her confidentiality oath.

Title: Birds of A Feather 12 Feb 2010 9:44 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Fully awesome! "you great booby" and "Master Severus? Why is your familiar screaming for me?" may very well be my new favorite fanfic quotes though "demon frog from Hell" is a close third

    Author's Response:

    Haha!

    Thanks, I thought they were pretty funny myself. Glad we share the same sense of humor.

Title: Vigil 12 Feb 2010 8:24 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    My family had a kitten that got into a yellow jacket's nest. The vet gave him an antihistamine shot and sent him home because he couldn't do any more. That little guy slept on my bed and I mostly on the floor, but it didn't work. Nothing I did helped, but I'm sure he's happier where he is now.

    Author's Response: Aww that's so sad! I hate it when pets die, though you're right, all animals go to heaven.  Thanks for reading.
Title: A Way Out 06 Feb 2010 4:14 pm
Reviewer: penguins1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow - things are going to get interesting!

    Author's Response: Thanks and yes, they are! Just keep reading!
Title: Freedom's Way 06 Feb 2010 8:48 am
Reviewer: KerrAvonsen (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a story that pulls you in, fascinates and intrigues...
    but it also feels like it's set in some strange parallel dimension where there are people with the same names as in canon, but are completely different people. The only one that feels close to being himself is Snape.

    Author's Response:

    Well, it is an AU universe, but I thought that Umbridge, Draco, Ron, Sirius, Lupin and Voldemort stayed pretty close to their canon counterparts. Dumbledore was well-meaning if maniplative just the way he's revealed to be in DH.

    Harry and Severus undergo a necessary transformation due to each discovering the other's pasts and bonding with each other. The only ones I really went out a limb with were Hagrid, because I don't like the way he's portrayed in the books as being a kind yet dimwitted individual--the stereotypical "giant" and it was the same with Crabbe, the "big dumb kid who hangs around the smart Malfoy". I felt that Mlafoy didn't really need them as friends, he was just using them, he always reminded me of a spoiled Mafia don's son.  Trelawney is another that I felt needed a make-over, so i made her less ditzy and more like a real Seer such as Cassandra.

    Hopefully you enjoyed the story despite the differences, which were done to make it unique and to stand out from the dozens of  other Harry-Snape mentor stories out there.

    Thank you for reading.

Title: Alike 31 Jan 2010 9:41 pm
Reviewer: malimed (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i really like your more intelligent, darker version of hagrid. he usually ends up as a sort of charicature rather than a true person with depth and history. i'm definitely enjoying the story so far!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much1 and I hope you like the rest of it. Hagrid will be in this quite a bit in this story.
Title: Alike 04 Jan 2010 2:50 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVE your interpretation of Hagrid here. He seems a much more rounded character, and done so without changing his fundamental makeup.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much1 I loved writing a different sort of Hagrid one who had more of a role to play than in canon.
Title: Freedom's Way 17 Oct 2009 1:49 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I LOVE this story and I'm so excited there will be a sequel!! It was a brilliant story and I hate to see it end. I hope we'll see more of Jace, Vince, and Hedwig in the next one.

    I'm going off to read the sequel!

    Author's Response: Thanks and you will see more of them in the sequel!

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