Yay! The cuff is off and the wicked hell witch is dead! I feeli like throwing a party! I loved it when the bird came and ate her! OOh such a great revenge. The part with Severus in the office was awesome too. Now that Harry's going to be his apprentice maybe he can learn something useful about potions and get closer to Sev.
Author's Response: Yes she is and thanks so much for reading1 You'll see what happens in the next chapter.
Oh wow! another brilliantly written story :)
Im so glad that I read it, from the start with Freedom becomming Severus' familiar to all the lovely bonding as mentor/apprentice too, it was a very good read, im very much looking forward to the sequel :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I loved writing this one and am glad you enjoyed it. The sequel Two Hawks Hunting, is posted now, so you can check it out. Leave me some good reviews, please!
LOL another chapter I simply have to review! I was starting to think that Umbridge would never be gone but you finished her off perfectly! the owls and Freedon flying after her was a lovely touch as was her being killed by a bird like creature :P
Author's Response: I thought that was the perfect end for the awful witch1 So glad you liked it!
Author's Response: I thought that was the perfect end for the awful witch1 So glad you liked it!
Aww I had to review this one now, it was so sweet! I too have sat up all night nursing one of my dogs newborn puppies and willing her to live (which she did) its a very emotional time for anyone to have and im glad that the story is already finished with a sequel so I know he cant die lol (and killing off Harry would have been kinda the end i guess...lol)
Author's Response: That's right, he won't die, but he sure had Sev scared. I'm so glad your dog's puppy lived, I hate it when my animals die on me. Hope you like the rest!
Aww! Sev hugged Harry and they finally made up! I wa sso happy when Snape admitted he was wrong to treat Harry like that. Yay! Now let's see what he does to that bitch Umbridge! Get her, Sev!
Author's Response: Yeah they both needed that talk and now they can begin to try and have a decent relationship as friends. Oh he will, don;t doubt it. She's going down!!
Loved this chapter. That potion sounds bad, I hope that Sev takes Hagrid's advice and listens to the letter and helps Harry. Umbridge needs to die!!
Author's Response: She does and she will! Just wait and see. It is a bad potion and hopefully Sev can reach Harry in time.
Sev why do you have to be so damn stubborn!!! LOL!!! Put your past aside and trust your gut instincts! You know you had a bond like no other with freedom regardless of whom he turned out to be.
Author's Response: Because he's Sev, of course! But he'll come round eventually, with a little help from someone he trusts.
Awwww, I feel bad for Harry. He tried to explain but Sev wouldnt let him. Dont be so stubborn and let him tell you he cares for you Sev!
Author's Response: That's right, Sev! he really does care for you.
That bitch!! She just makes my blood boil!!!! It wasn't the right time or place yet for freedom to tell snape yet. I am hoping this wont ruien the friendship or bond that has grown between them. Great chapter, as always!
Author's Response: You're right. It was too soon, but she forced his hand. Ah well, you'll see what happens next.
I really enjoyed this chapter. I loved how snape told us about his past with Lily and james. It gave us some explination as to how snape is the way he is. Fantastic job on this chapter!!! Im glad freedom "Harry" was around to hear the truth and hear of snape and lily's connection to eachother.
Author's Response: It was something he needed to hear and you're right, it did give us plenty of explanation about why Sev behaved like he did.
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