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Title: Detentions and Dreams 30 Mar 2009 6:29 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello! Just a quick review to say that I loved this chapter :) I especially enjoyed how Harry behaved with Snape at the very end ...

    Author's Response: That was one of my favorite parts, him interacting with his familiar, I love it when they banter with each other.  You'll see a lot more of that in this next chapter.  Though I also enjoy giving Draco his just deserts.
Title: Detentions and Dreams 30 Mar 2009 2:51 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Malfoy and the other boys got exactly what they deserved--good for Snape! I also liked how Hagrid persuaded Sev to keep the bird, they really do need each other. Harry's dreams were good too. Update soon!

    Author's Response: They do and Severus now realizes this, thank goodness.  But hagrid made some very persuasive points.  I have, so check out the next chappie.
Title: Detentions and Dreams 30 Mar 2009 1:41 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the punishments! And "dad" will know for all of the Boys? He-HE-He! They are so dead. Lucius is going to have a complete (albit noble in attitude) fit.

    Harry!hawk is acting a lot like Hedwig.

    I love your story! More soon please.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    He will and Draco is in SOOO much trouble! Stealing from your Head and hurting his familiar to boot is so NOT done. 

    He is, isn't he? Hawks and owls are somewhat alike in the way they display affection. 

    More has been added, thanks for reading!

Title: Detentions and Dreams 30 Mar 2009 12:55 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant puinishment idea and a cute scene at the end. Keep up the great work and post soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you and I've just posted the next part, it's cute and funny.
Title: Detentions and Dreams 30 Mar 2009 11:57 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Wonderful! More has been posted!
Title: Detentions and Dreams 30 Mar 2009 9:45 am
Reviewer: CrazyDragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Heh heh heh. If that doesn't get it through Draco's thick skull to at least not cross Snape, nothing will! There might be hope yet for Crabbe and Goyle, too, if they decide to go follow somebody who uses their brain a bit more. I can't wait to see their House's reaction...! ::snicker:: Even if they're likely to not broadcast it to the other Houses, I'm sure *somebody* will notice.

    Is Dumbledore going to catch a clue at some point? The ol' geezer's about as sensitive as a *rock!* ::shakes head:: I kind of hope that when Harry's restored (and Snape's out of the Hospital Wing with a replacement gasket, or two!!) he and Snape can stay bonded, and tell Dumbledore just exactly where he can go when he tries to send Harry back to the Dursleys again...

    Communication potion next chapter, eh? Ooooh, that's got possibilities! It should certainly make it interesting; whether Severus figures things out before or after Harry is restored to himself. I am *so* glad you don't post monthly or longer; the wait would just kill me!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, they'll be wondering why those three are cleaning after hours and stuff, and I'm sure rumors will be floating all over, as usual.  You can see Slytherin House's reaction in my next chapter!

    Well, the old man tends to look at what he wants to happen, rather than what is actually happening.  Yeah, that could happen, and probably will, since Harry is going to find out some things about his Headmaster he never knew before, as well as Severus. 

    being able to talk to his familiar is going to make Snape's life very interesting, to say the least.  And Sev will start to suspect before Harry comes back.

    I'm glad you like my speedy updates, I too hate waiting for a story to be updated and wondering if it's been abandoned or something. 

Title: Detentions and Dreams 30 Mar 2009 9:17 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chappie!! And you used my idea!! YEY! I like how Harry has bird-instincts, but at the same time understands when Snape speaks and reacts to it in a semi-human way. Much fun!

    Author's Response: I did! It was a great one, thanks! Yeah, its a weird sort of dichotomy, he's a hawk but has human memories, it's confusing for the poor thing.  But eventually he'll get his head straightened out. 
Title: Detentions and Dreams 30 Mar 2009 8:48 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I loved the punishments!
    Can't wait to see what happens when Sev finds out the truth behind his familiar.

    Author's Response:

    Good, i wa skind of worried that I did too much to them, but guess not. 

    There will be lots of fireworks and angst when THAT finally happens. 

    Check out what happens next between the Boy Who Became A Hawk and our snarky professor.

Title: Vigil 28 Mar 2009 7:21 pm
Reviewer: Mystery (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well that was sad, but I'm glad Harry is still living. As far as punishment goes, I think Draco and co deserve to be suspended for their actions. I don't know if Hogwarts has suspension, but at our school we don't send the kids home. Instead they still have to do school work, but they do it in a room by themselves and it's not hands on either. It's all essay writing and what not. Also all extra-curicular privileges are taken away as well. You might even make it similar to grounding, meaning the three have to stay cooped up in some isolation room and aren't aloud to leave except for during meal times and to go to the designted room where they do school work. And of course letters should be sent home as well. Good luck deciding what to do.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review and your ideas as well.  That sounds like what my nephew told me they do in his school, in-school suspension, they call it, and there is a name only I forget what it is, and he said his friend got it once for something and it really sucked.  He said they were there the whole day and could only do schoolwork and homework and even ate lunch there and it was so boring.  It sounds like a really effective punishment.
Title: Vigil 27 Mar 2009 5:33 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That was very sad, though I'm very glad the hawk is still living. Severus needs a little company in his life, even if it's from Harry Potter, lol. I'm excited to find out how long Harry will stay in his hawk form. I'm afraid that finding out that Harry is the hawk might be a very deep blow for Sev after he gets attached.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: He does indeed, even if he'll never admit it.  Harry will be in his hawk form for quite sometime, since he can't recall who he really is and also doesn't know how to change back.  And you're right about Severus discovering his familiar is Harry is going to make him freak at first.  Until he realizes that he can still have a friend in the boy as well as the hawk . . .if he is willing to overlook the obvious.  But that's another battle.

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