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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 7:05 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    My God that was fast1 Do you ever sleep?? But this was so good!

    Poor harry! Snape better pulverize those idiots, especially Draco! Update again please!

    Author's Response:

    LOl! yes, a little bit. 

    he will be doing some heavy duty pulverizing soon, promise!

Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 5:26 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    And Draco is a ratter is this one.

    Oh, well, he can't be a good boy in all of them.

    Snape is going to have their skins.

    Author's Response:

    Very true, i enjoy writing Good Draco, but it's also fun to write him nasty, like he is in this one.

    Skins and organs too, I'd be guessing.  Stealing from Snape is such a VERY BAD idea.  And to add insult to thievery by hurting his hawk . . .

    But first he has to catch them, you can see the next chapter to see how he does that.

Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 4:50 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i never like malfoy.he is very snapish.how snape find what happen to bird/harry actually? because i cant imagine snape find what to do malfoy and gang

    Author's Response: Malfoy is a very annoting spoiled cruel child.  Severus will discover who went into the lab, he guards his private stock very carefully and subtly and he is going to jump all over Malfoy and Co. like an angry leopard.
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 3:50 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    NOOOOOO YOu can't stop there! Glares daggers at the screen. You CAN'T leave us there! Please tell me that Snape has SOME sort of monior on our poor young Hawk. (Wait, doesn't Snape have Wards like Crazy all over his private space? HOw did those dunderheads get in without being caught? I mean Harry, Ron, and Hermione were only able to steal from the classroom storage area when they made the polyjuice potion--But his Private Stores???? Those boys had best be caught and squashed or my admiriation for Snapes Slytherin sneakiness will be completely undermined.)

    MORE SOON PLEASE!

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Snape does have things unseen in his laboratory, and ESPECIALLY on his private stock. 

    Those three are going to be praying for expulsion when he gets through with them.

Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 2:48 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, Draco you are asking for trouble with a capital T! Insane I tell you!. And Crabbe and Goyle; well they're just idiots to follow Draco's lead.

    I'm really worried for Harry though. Hope Snape catches the lot of them.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Draco really is insane and he's going to regret it! Big time! As for his two partners, yes they are idiots for following him, and they're going to regret it too!

    Harry is in a bad way now, but Severus should be able to save him.  And he will catch the Slippery Trio, he's not a master spy for nothing! 

    Guess what? I've updated . . .again!

Title: A Frightened Fledgling 24 Mar 2009 2:45 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, how did you get two more chapters so fast? Ok, so if Harry is missing long enough, then surely someone might put two and two together?

    Imagine Snape wondering why on earth DD would think to look for Harry at Snape's and Snape wouldn't care less!

    Poor Harry. I always wondered if a character would sort of feel trapped inside of an animagus for too long, or do they adapt to becoming the animal they've transfigured into, and not care about becoming their human form. If I had my human memories, I think that I'd feel rather handicapped in the form of a Hawk, although I guess being able to fly gives you an enormous amount of freedom. Except that I'm afraid of heights! :)

    Author's Response:

    Uh, I write really fast when my Muse is pushing me. 

    Someone could, if they knew harry was trying to become an Animagus, but no one knew he was reading that text, he took it home during Christmas break and when he returned, nobody was paying any attention to him.  The only way anyone could figure it out is if they found the books in the Owlery, but . . .something happens, you'll see next chapter. 

    It does, and I think that the adult Animagus's keep their memories, and can switch back and forth, so they don't go crazy.  But I also see the animal form as seductive, can you imagine what it must be like to be able to fly, to hear like nothing you've ever imagined and to see things over a hundred feet away? It would be such an incredible experience, i might not wan tto return to being palin old me either.  And since Harry can't remember who he is at the moment . . .of course the real question is how he'll feel once he starts to remember who he is and what Snape has done for him as a hawk and also what he learns about the man as a person. 

    I guess a hawk form wouldn't be good for you then, huh? But what about a cat?

     

    Oh, by the way, I've updated again, LOL! Insane Muse!

Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 2:03 pm
Reviewer: Valin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please do keep updating insanely fast! I love ur story!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I shall and I have!
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 10:55 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Never liked Draco. Pity the hawk did not bit his face!

    Author's Response:

    Ooh, now that would be hard to explain.  "Mr. Malfoy why is your nose missing?"--Snape.

    Draco--"Uh . . .well . . .there was an accident . . ."

    Hope you like the next part, it involves Snape & Hagrid and a rather revealing conversation, just posted it late last night!

Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 6:36 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Draco is SUCH a F*CKING BRAT!!!

    Author's Response:

    I agree, he's as nasty as they come!

    FYI--an update is here!

Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 5:48 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no oh no oh no!!!!! Poor Harry!hawk! Draco is such a cruel, little prissy boy and i hope that he gets into trouble!! Yikes!

    I do hope that Snape will come soon! So awful!

    Great writing and good development of the story! Thanks for the quick updates!

    Author's Response: He is, just like in third year when he made the hippogriff bite him.  Severus will come and Draco will pay for this, one way or another.

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