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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 5:19 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I hope that Harry remembers this and tells Snape.

    Author's Response: he will remember it, but in order for him to tell Severus anything, they have to speak the same language.  Or Severus could find out another way.  Check out the next chappie to see how.
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 5:18 am
Reviewer: LadyNiteRaven (Signed) [Report This]
    ACK! NO! you cant leave him hanging like that! more please.....!

    Author's Response: Okay, more is posted!
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 5:12 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I bet Crabbe will come back and fix him. I remember the summary of this saying something about how Harry would discover the people who were true friends in this story and I think that could easily include some people we didn't expect. At least, I hope that's what happens--I'd like to see Crabbe with a heart.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: It could, but Severus will NOT be pleased to find him there! And especially not when he learns what went on there besides the theft of his ingredients.  Hell hath no fury like Snape when his hawk is threatened.  And now you can see Sev's POV as he searches for Harry. 
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 5:08 am
Reviewer: justjoanjm (Signed) [Report This]
    it's great. I'm still enjoying it plenty. :)

    I just hope draco and company gets caught. Just once...

    Author's Response: They will, Snape's not dumb, there are silent wards all over his lab, and especially his private potions store, as you'll see. 
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 4:51 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::glares daggers::

    Updating insanely fast on /this/ story, yet... I see very little progress with your promised sequels.

    I'm serious now; you know I'm harping just to annoy you right? Don't take it seriously. I'm as patient as can be. When you update, you'll update and I'll read it and love it.

    Ooh, Draco had better get into hell from Sev. The idiot can't just walk into the potions' lab without repercussions. How angry is Sev going to be?

    Update soon, darling.

    Love always,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    I know and eventually I WILL get there.  ut right now my Muse says write about hawks and Snape, sooo . . .

    Draco will catch hell all right and Severus is going to be spitting mad and ready to throttle something or someone!

Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 4:22 am
Reviewer: FS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh no, you've got to help him quick! I hope Snape tears their arses to shreds!

    Author's Response: Oh, he will, believe me! he  doesn't like lying little thieves and especially kids who are cruel to helpless animals.
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 3:43 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please don't leave me hanging...update soon! :-)

    Author's Response: Um . . .I'll try not to! I've just updated again, by the way.
Title: A Frightened Fledgling 23 Mar 2009 7:24 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Loved Harry's reaction to Sev's hand and how you show Severus as being a creature of impulse too sometimes. And Voldy reciting haiku is too funny!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted to show that even Severus can do something spur of the moment, instead of endlessly analyzing something.  yeah, I thought so too!
Title: A Frightened Fledgling 23 Mar 2009 7:21 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I believe you.

    When Dumbledore entered I just couldn't help but think that he truly is an idiot. I love him when he's written properly and hate him when he's not; I like him as a grandfatherly type or the manipulative type. I'm not picky. Well... except for Severus.

    I wonder, I wonder... how will dear old Severus react when he learns of Harry's true whereabouts and form? I wonder still... does Severus have a predatory bird animagus form?

    Update soon darling, and I shall do the same.

    I eagerly await your sequels.

    ::winks and darts away::

    Love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Old Dumbles does have the worst timing, doesn't he?

    Severus will be VERY shocked, to say the least, LOL! I'm looking forward to writing that chapter. 

    As to your second question . . .maybe, you'll have to wait to discover that.

    Good I'm awaiting your next chapter of Moon Called.   

     

Title: A Frightened Fledgling 23 Mar 2009 7:13 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful! I love how Severus took care of hawk Harry and it was funny when Harry bit him and then was threatened with being made into potions ingredients! Great story!

    Author's Response: I couldn't resist that moment, LOL!

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