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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: A Frightened Fledgling 23 Mar 2009 2:32 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape to the rescue again, hmmmm I wonder how Snape would feel if he had chopped up the hawk and then found out it was Harry? If a wizard in animal form dies does it revert back to human or stay in the animal form?

    Author's Response:

    uh, I hope we never find out, Severus would end up in Azkaban for sure.  And then Voldy would win. 

    I would have to say that if an Animagus dies as an animal, he or she would revert back to her orginal form, since magic is keeping the wizard in that shape and once the wizard dies, so does the magic.  So if Harry died in hawk form, he would change back to human afterwards.

Title: A Frightened Fledgling 23 Mar 2009 1:36 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Really wonderful.

    So, Harry has lost himself in the hawk? How long will it take for him to remember?

    Will Snape be the one to check the owlry? (or someone else who thinks to use Hedwig to find our lost boy)?

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he has for now. 

    It'll take him awhile for him to reconnect, he was hurt badly and a part of him doesn't WANT to remember who is, remember the reason why he sought Animagus form in the first place was to get away from his old life.  So he's sort of fighting the memories subconsciously.

    As for the owlery, you'll see what happenes with that in about two chapters.  It's too bad no one ever thinks to speak to the owls, huh?

Title: A Frightened Fledgling 23 Mar 2009 11:32 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Vold's haiku:
    And when all enemies are cowed or dead,
    let's make some new
    - no need to spoil a good bloodshed.
    Haha. Of course we are interested. Everyone loves good animagi stories :)
    Mila

    Author's Response:

    coolness!

    I am terrible at writing haikus, but my friend is brilliant. 

    This was really good though.

    Hope you like the next part, it'll have a bit more action.

Title: A Frightened Fledgling 23 Mar 2009 11:05 am
Reviewer: FireOtaku18 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Title: A Frightened Fledgling 23 Mar 2009 9:51 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, oh sweet irony. I love how Snape is more impassioned about helping the hawk than Harry.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Funny, isn't it? I love playing about with Sev like that! He's going to be one very astonished person when he finally realizes what he's brought home, LOL! But that won't be for a while yet.
Title: A Frightened Fledgling 23 Mar 2009 7:55 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, awesome story so far! I absolutely adore the healing scene, and how Snape tied Harry!hawk to the perch so he can't leave. Great premise and you are doing a great job! Please update when you can. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks, I had to do a lot of research on injured birds to find out just what you had to do to fix broken wings and tying a hawk to a perch was something a falconer does so the bird can't fly if injured, but there is some give i.n the jesses, as you'll see next chapter.  That one will have mostly Harry!hawk's perspective, plus an intruder in the lab.
Title: A Frightened Fledgling 23 Mar 2009 5:23 am
Reviewer: justjoanjm (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying this story, thank you for writing.

    Author's Response: You're welcome! I think this one is going to be very interesting.
Title: A Way Out 22 Mar 2009 9:19 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello! This is a really interesting first chapter. I especially like that Harry loses his memory, I guess he will see Snape without all their history. I'm looking forward to the next chpater.

    Author's Response: He will and he's in for quite a shock, as Snape inadvertantly reveals things he's kept hidden for a long time! But the next chapter mostly deals with Severus trying to heal Harry's wings, not an easy task!
Title: A Way Out 22 Mar 2009 5:52 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You know I love you, right?

    Ok. ::claps hands:: Where is it??? I've been gone for a week and there's /still/ no sequel to Prince or Angel? ::begins to pull out hair:: Am I gonna have to come down there and /make/ you sit down and write it???

    Poor Harry not remember that he's a human with so many problems. He needs an adult in his life and Severus is just the person to do that.

    Update soon, darling.

    Love always,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    I know, I know! And I'm working on it, really!

    But this one just snagged me and I just HAD to write it!

    I have a partial rough draft for Heir and another for Angel.

    And harry's amnesia might prove both blessing and curse, though he will eventually regain his memory.  And then let certain wizards beware!

Title: A Way Out 21 Mar 2009 6:41 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful start! Be careful about stepping on toes though - you might want to read "The Last Gift," so that you don't inadvertantly make your story too similar. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'll skim it, but this one is something I thought up on the spur of the moment, and I don't recall any fics recently with harry as a hawk.  The next chapter's up!

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