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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: A Way Out 21 Mar 2009 12:17 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    COOL! I like it! Do more!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I just did!
Title: A Way Out 20 Mar 2009 8:05 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, very nice start. It should be interesting to see a softer side of Snape, that shows compassion for an animal.

    I find it hard to keep up with "one" story, how do you manage to write so many?


    I'm guessing that at one point Snape will find out that the animagus was Harry? I'm curious to know what his reaction will be!! Hee hee!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, but he still has plenty of snark in him still, as you'll see!

    I have no idea, it just happens, my Muse is insane and never ending plot bunnies attack me at any given moment. 

    Yes, he will but not for awhile, and Harry will find out some very unsettling things about several people as well.  Both of them will be quite shocked, LOL!

Title: A Way Out 20 Mar 2009 7:36 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was great Snapegirl! I love hawks, they're beautiful and I'm glad you wrote about them and HP in one story, XD I can't wait for more. The grammar was great, and you wrote it very well. I did find it rather odd, Snape talking outloud to the hawk, a simple 'hush' seemed like all we would hear. But I guess it was one of the few ways to let Harry know what he was. Well done!

    Author's Response: So do I, they and peregrine falcons are my favorite birds.  I always wanted to do something like this and hope it turns out okay.  It's funny, but some people tend to talk to their animals like they would people, and Severus is one of them, at least in private, LOL!  I've just updated, by the way!
Title: A Way Out 20 Mar 2009 7:10 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great start - this sounds like it will be a good story!

    Author's Response: I hope so, I'm doing a lot of research on falconry and red-tailed hawks for it and there will be a lot of revelations for both of our favorite wizards coming up! And the next part's up!
Title: A Way Out 20 Mar 2009 6:45 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great beginning! I look forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thanks and more has been added!
Title: A Way Out 20 Mar 2009 6:05 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting start--I'm excited to see where this goes.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Great I hope to surprise you with how Snape handles Harry both as a hawk and a student.  And now you can see Severus trying to save the injured hawk!
Title: A Way Out 20 Mar 2009 5:44 pm
Reviewer: cammy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really liked this first chap!!! I can iamgine that Harry will be soooo horrified when he realizes who actually found him... Please update soon:-)

    Author's Response: he will be, but only at first, since he'll also discover some imprtant things about Snape which might change his mind about the way he thinks of the Potions Master.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: A Way Out 20 Mar 2009 4:32 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Update soon, please! Mila

    Author's Response: Thanks and I have, so check it out, Mila.
Title: A Way Out 20 Mar 2009 2:13 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome start!!

    Author's Response: Thanks Jan.  You might see a very different side of Harry in this one given the fact that he's a hawk without a memory yet. 
Title: A Way Out 20 Mar 2009 12:23 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the idea of Harry being a hawk, it fits him, but what a way to start off1 Hope Snape is patient.

    Author's Response: Yes, poor harry! He always manages to get into trouble.  As for Sev, you can see how patient he is next chapter.

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