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Reviews For Depths of Darkness
Title: Chapter 3 08 Jul 2022 6:55 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter!
Title: Chapter 3 29 Aug 2015 7:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well written chapter thank you
Title: Chapter 3 28 Mar 2009 4:49 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    That's funny, when Snape said that another teacher would not be as lenient as he? As if!

    I was kind of surprised when Snape made the reference to Harry's eyes being like Lilys. Not like him to reveal something so personal. I guess that he couldn't help himself.

    Poor Harry, thinking that he doesn't deserve to be fed, or to be treated well.

    I'm so glad that we seem to have new writers on here now, who like you, are proving to write original new takes on old, familiar storylines. Nicely done.
Title: Chapter 3 28 Mar 2009 5:34 am
Reviewer: Twinfetish (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the new take on Harry gets sorted into Slytheirn and is an abused little kid.

    I look forward to your next update.
Title: Chapter 3 28 Mar 2009 1:22 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great story. The first chapters were great. I'm just curious; is Dumbles going to be a bad guy in this one, or is he just really blinded by his idea of the 'greater good?' Hmmm...
    I also love your characterization of Snape. He doesn't seem to want to like Harry, but then he can't really hate one of his Slytherins. You portrayed that mini battle perfectly. Your doing a wonderful job on this fic. I cannot wait for more. Thanks.
Title: Chapter 3 27 Mar 2009 10:15 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great start! I love to read Slytherin!Harry stories. Can't wait for more!
Title: Chapter 3 27 Mar 2009 5:26 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you made Harry a victim of Gryffindor bullying, instead of the other way around. And how Snape is right there to counter it. This would have reminded the Potions Master of his own schooldays, when he was tormented by the Marauders.
    I liked the conversation between Sev and Harry at night, and the part where Severus tells Harry he better hurry back to bed before another teacher finds him who's not as lenient as he is made me smile--since he's probably the strictest teacher in the school right then, except for when Umbridge comes.

    Good cliffhanger and I know Severus is going to be lying in wait to speak to Harry ASAP.

    Oh, a minor thing, I noticed that on the Takes Place category you have down Pre-Hogwarts, but it should be Pre-COS, since this is the first year and Harry is school-age. Pre-Hogwarts is for a younger Harry, I know because I write lots of stories set in that time period.

    Keep writing!

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