Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Dueling 06 Jul 2010 2:01 am
Reviewer: Ray22 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    LOVE THE STORY!
    Can't wait for the next chaper!
    I'm not exactly sure how your story should lead on.
    I guess Harry should have some nightmares about Sirius and Snape could be there to comfort him? Or....."The Fates" Could come to Snape in a dream and tell him he's doing something wrong.
Title: Fate 01 Dec 2009 5:34 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't imagine Dumbledore saying "Okay"...
Title: Dueling 15 Aug 2009 2:53 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter.

    Can't wait for the next one. I'm really curious about what Ron and Hermione's letters are about.
Title: Returning 15 Aug 2009 2:49 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm glad that you're back. Great chapter.

    I'm happy that Snape is going to give Harry a chance to take potions.

    On to the next chappie. :)
Title: Condolences 12 Aug 2009 1:43 am
Reviewer: xxslytheringirlxx (Signed) [Report This]
    please dont tell me you abandond this story:(

    Author's Response:

    I haven't abondoned it. My mom was in the hospital for awhile and I didn't have time to write. I'm also having major writers block but I'm doing my best to stick with my story.

Title: Fate 01 Apr 2009 6:41 am
Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) [Report This]
    While I have no problems with others using the idea of Snape going back in time to help Harry (it wasn't my idea to begin with), but to use the exact same title as my story for a story with the same concept is going too far. Please change the name of your story to avoid confusion between our two stories. I haven't abandoned mine. I'm in the process of going through it and correcting things before I continue.

    Author's Response: I didn't realize that I was using your title. I'll change it as soon as I can. Sorry about that.
Title: Condolences 31 Mar 2009 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story. I hope you update frequently with lots more story!!!! Yay!!! Lots of potential.
Title: Condolences 31 Mar 2009 2:08 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I agree; this story has a very interesting premise. I would like to see more from you. I like your Snape, and am interested to see if he's able to really change things. And I agree that a beta would be very helpful to help with the little things like spelling and grammar. Since your story is mostly dialogue, it would be interesting to see more descriptions of what the characters are doing as they speak...their facial expressions, reactions to others, etc. Good start. I hope you'll write more.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the advice!
Title: Condolences 31 Mar 2009 1:52 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Keep writing, and don't get discouraged. A beta is always helpful, not only for spelling and grammar, but they often are very insightful on ideas to help your story flow smoothly.

    I'm looking forward to reading more from you!!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the support!
Title: Fate 31 Mar 2009 1:49 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice begininnig. I'm curious to see how Severus will change events this time around.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not exactly sure how he's going to change thing yet though.

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