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Reviews For Lily's Charm: Legacy
I just have to say that I think Ron and Hermione went a little farther than K-I-S-S-I-N-G, lol! (Not that a pregnancy scare is a laughing matter, though!)
"Ron and Hermione sitting in a tree... K....I....S....S....I....N....G...." You did a great job of portraying Ron's worry and anguish over this however. As I said on the board, I can totally buy this scenario, from them actually having sex to the contraception failures. No doubt, this will keep Harry's pants zipped! And how much do I absolutely adore little Levi and his protectionism (is that word?) over Harry. You've got me kind of worried however with your chapter end notes: "And it is said that when the Leviathan dies, the world dies with him." That has an awfully ominous foreshadowing sound to it. (Nobody else mentioned that, did they? Am I the only one wondering about that little tidbit?) Waiting on that next chapter, my dear. Waiting, waiting, waiting....
I loved the way Severus confronted Vernon and Petunia in the first chapter. It's long past time someone took them to task. I do hope that at some point Harry and Dudley might have some contact, though, since it seems that Dudders might have made a change for the better. I, too, love Levi...what an awesome animal. I think I'm envious of your creativity, Tabitha, did you know that? Now for the second chapter...wow! First, Daddy Remus is heartwarming and I loved how Severus was able to advise him. I bet that's not a scene that JKR ever envisioned, lol, but in your universe it absolutely works. As for the news about Ron and Hermione...I have to say I'm shocked. Hermione is the last person in the world I'd have expected to have to deal with a pregnancy scare (and I devoutly hope it's just a scare). She's always so careful and prepared for everything ahead of time. I'm so worried for her, poor thing, A baby at this point in her life could really mess things up. And Ron, oh I really wouldn't want to be his shoes. I think he's going to have 4 very upset parents to face, his own and the Grangers, even if it is a false alarm. Molly's going to go through the roof. People are going to be able to hear her all over Britain. Hey, there'll be no need for Poppy to speak with Grangers then, lol. I imagine Arthur will be quieter, but very disappointed which can be even worse...though you never know. Arthur seems like the kind of person who is usually so calm and easy-going, but when he does get angry, look out! We don't really know enough about the Grangers to know their reactions, but I'm sure they'll be upset, too. And all the professors knowing...talk about embarrassing. Though if a little Weasley/Granger kidlet is on the way that might be the least of their worries. Now, you absolutely must hurry up with the next chapter and answer the big question, cause I don't think we'll survive much longer without knowing!
And now the entire staff knows. Oh dear, Facing Voldie will be nothing to facing Mr. Granger. Oh dear. Author's Response: LOL I do believe you are first to bring up that little point. Poor Ron. :oP
Author's Response: Thanks! :o)
Speed of the update was awesome as well. Author's Response: Thanks. With Crucio all done, I can be a bit speedier. :o)
Wow! I really hope that Hermione's not pregnant. Oh my, what a lesson for them all. Ooh, I want a kylaria! He sounds so adorable. What can I say, I loved it. I don't know which chapter I liked better, the one where Sev kicks Vernons butt, and tells Petunia's horse-face off, or this one with all the cute scenes of Levi, and Hermione's possible pregnancy. I have a feeling that this is going to be a story filled with one action-packed, powerful emotion-filled chapter, after another. Great start Tabitha. Ooh, please post the next chappie soon. I gotta know if Hermione and Ron are going to be parents. Oh, I really hope that this was just a lesson, and that she's not prego. Ooh, it would really turn their lives updside down to have a baby at sixteen! Or are Ron and Hermione seventeen yet? Are they older than Harry? Author's Response: If you go by canon dates, yeah they are 17. Still, pretty young though. LOL And yes, Harry's little dragon is quite adorable. Glad you liked it. And thanks for the review.
Author's Response: LOL Well, that's a great description for Ron. Poor guy, indeed...
On a lighter note, I love what you're doing with the little dragon. When he roared at Ron for hitting Harry, for whatever reason I pictured him roaring almost as loudly as a real dragon, since he's so protective and all. I also loved how he was circling Ron's head like a vulture. I'd also like to mention that before we found out about Ron's predicament, I got really excited about how many baby scenes are probably going to occur in this series. It was cute to see Sev instructing Remus on how to deal with young Sirius. I look forward to more of these cutsie scenes :D. It was a pleasant surprise to see that you had updated so soon. I can't wait to read more. -P.G. Author's Response: LOL A vow of abstinence would certainly please Severus. I am quite found of Harry's little dragon too. He's quite the protective little bugger. And that, combined with empathic abilities, makes for a great companion. :o) Yep, lots of baby scenes. Harry is already quite taken with his little godson. :o) Thanks for the review, PG. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. |
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