Wait, Severus took the curse off of her? Does that mean she isn't going to die after all or is the damage already done? I hope that will take away some of Severus' guilt that I imagine he does feel, little though it may be. I'm glad he's chosen to protect Harry and keep him out of the situation. Who knows what Eileen would say to Harry, but I doubt it would be anything good.
I'm very excited with what you're doing with Levi! That was a great scene--I love how he saved Harry! I also think the idea of him flying side-by-side with Harry on his broomstick is really cute.
Good work!
-P.G.
| Title: Chapter 5: Haven't You Ever Heard of Avada Kedavra?
| 30 Apr 2009 9:05 am
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| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed)
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Good chapter. Just a little point, but I was struck by the fact that Severus didn't even punish Harry or his rashness in flying over the forbidden forest. That's proof right there of how much their relationship has changed.
I feel really badly for Severus about his parents. I hope he doesn't shut Harry out too much.
| Title: Chapter 5: Haven't You Ever Heard of Avada Kedavra?
| 30 Apr 2009 5:40 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh wow, Levi protected Harry. That is so sweet. I love that little dragon.
Poor Severus, having to be torn like that. Between hatred and worry over Harry's reaction should he find out what Severus did.
Tsk tsk Harry. You'll never lose your propensity for getting into trouble young man. But I'm so glad that all he got was a concussion. I was really worried!
I'm so glad you gave us this lovely chappie Tabitha, and it was well worth the wait!
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