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Reviews For Lily's Charm: Legacy
your killing me And please put Ginny and Harry back together it's too sad
This isn't even the horrible tragic angst of people dying... but it's still painful to read, especially when you leave it on a note of Harry all alone crying, thinking that everyone has pushed him away in one form or another. Just when I thought it'd be clear sailing for Harry and Severus... you know, after nearly dying multiple times, and bringing back Sirius only to have him get killed again, and working out one father-son relationship issue after another... there's still more. (Poor Severus too, having to face the fact that his son still thinks - if only in a half-conscious sort of way - that the strap might still be used on him). And you write it all so well! If only you didn't end on these exquisitely painful notes! I hope you post soon, so we can get that satisfying sense of resolution that comes from a good Harry-Severus reconciliation scene in which they work through their miscommunication and get all emotional in their cloud-flame bond and give each other hugs :) Followed by Harry-Ron and Harry-Ginny... and maybe Harry-Weasleys? Or is that too much for the new chapter? :) Please post soon!
I'm not sure this is what you meant, but it is how I read it.
now i feel sorry for harry.he love so much ginny and he scared loose her.i hope they never break up. Author's Response: Ginny's not listening to her family. Her mother spoke with her, yes, but this is Ginny who is doing what she thinks she should do. Remember too that she is vulnerable and confused. That doesn't make her weak. And she won't be dating August, that much I can promise you. Thanks for reading.
This is my favorite chapter so far. I love the ginny/harry scene. And Ron's reaction was so good. But the strap one touched me the most. Keep up the great work 8D
I bet that Severus couldn't tell him in words, so he wrote a letter. Aw. I'm glad that he burnt the strap, but I was expecting Severus to lay into Harry for taking off like that. It looks like Harry's getting off easy...or is he? I loved that fight between Ron and Harry. That was great. Best chapter yet. I want more. Hee hee!
And Ron! Yikes, I know I should be understanding...he feels like he should defend his sister's honor. But I'm furiouis at him for punching Harry anyway. And then...the strap. OMG. The fear it suddenly gave Harry (let's face it, Severus is acting strangely towards him as compared to where they had been) and Severus "sensing" that fear...just made my heart break into pieces. Harry, Harry...with Ginny taking a huge step back away from you, your best friend punching you in the face, and now Severus' behavior, I just need to sit and cuddle you. You poor thing. We'll cry together. (Great chapter...truly gut-wrenching, Tabitha).
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