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Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes You Just Need to Clock Someone 15 Jun 2009 8:18 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please update
    your killing me
    And please put Ginny and Harry back together it's too sad
Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes You Just Need to Clock Someone 31 May 2009 7:14 am
Reviewer: Ellie K (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How many different types of angst can you fit into one chapter :)

    This isn't even the horrible tragic angst of people dying... but it's still painful to read, especially when you leave it on a note of Harry all alone crying, thinking that everyone has pushed him away in one form or another.

    Just when I thought it'd be clear sailing for Harry and Severus... you know, after nearly dying multiple times, and bringing back Sirius only to have him get killed again, and working out one father-son relationship issue after another... there's still more. (Poor Severus too, having to face the fact that his son still thinks - if only in a half-conscious sort of way - that the strap might still be used on him).

    And you write it all so well! If only you didn't end on these exquisitely painful notes! I hope you post soon, so we can get that satisfying sense of resolution that comes from a good Harry-Severus reconciliation scene in which they work through their miscommunication and get all emotional in their cloud-flame bond and give each other hugs :) Followed by Harry-Ron and Harry-Ginny... and maybe Harry-Weasleys? Or is that too much for the new chapter? :)

    Please post soon!
Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes You Just Need to Clock Someone 31 May 2009 12:56 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very sad chapter, but very well done. I can't wait for more.
Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes You Just Need to Clock Someone 30 May 2009 9:44 am
Reviewer: Blackthorne (Signed) [Report This]
    The red strap symbolizes all the violence and cruelty passed down through the generations of the Snape family. Severus' curse on his mother was the final act in this "tradition". Now that he has ended the curse and she has passed on, the symbol can be destroyed, marking the end of an era.

    I'm not sure this is what you meant, but it is how I read it.
Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes You Just Need to Clock Someone 29 May 2009 8:04 pm
Reviewer: Buchling (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Beware of idiotic, bigheaded, hypocritical gits of older brothers and other family members with double standards!
Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes You Just Need to Clock Someone 29 May 2009 7:55 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    thanks for new chapter.i don't like weak ginny.she listen her family now but i really really hate if she date with august.(therefor i never read ginny/harry stories)
    now i feel sorry for harry.he love so much ginny and he scared loose her.i hope they never break up.

    Author's Response: Ginny's not listening to her family.  Her mother spoke with her, yes, but this is Ginny who is doing what she thinks she should do.  Remember too that she is vulnerable and confused.  That doesn't make her weak.  And she won't be dating August, that much I can promise you.  Thanks for reading.
Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes You Just Need to Clock Someone 29 May 2009 5:45 pm
Reviewer: Ayana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Omg D:
    This is my favorite chapter so far.

    I love the ginny/harry scene.
    And Ron's reaction was so good.
    But the strap one touched me the most.

    Keep up the great work 8D
Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes You Just Need to Clock Someone 29 May 2009 1:04 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    You left it there!!! Oh no!!

    I bet that Severus couldn't tell him in words, so he wrote a letter. Aw. I'm glad that he burnt the strap, but I was expecting Severus to lay into Harry for taking off like that. It looks like Harry's getting off easy...or is he?

    I loved that fight between Ron and Harry. That was great. Best chapter yet. I want more. Hee hee!
Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes You Just Need to Clock Someone 29 May 2009 10:25 am
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Why is it my heart hurt so much for Harry? I couldn't even be mad at him for ignoring Severus through their connection, even when I knew it was wrong of him. Because I just knew what Ginny was about to do to the poor guy.

    And Ron! Yikes, I know I should be understanding...he feels like he should defend his sister's honor. But I'm furiouis at him for punching Harry anyway.

    And then...the strap. OMG. The fear it suddenly gave Harry (let's face it, Severus is acting strangely towards him as compared to where they had been) and Severus "sensing" that fear...just made my heart break into pieces.

    Harry, Harry...with Ginny taking a huge step back away from you, your best friend punching you in the face, and now Severus' behavior, I just need to sit and cuddle you. You poor thing. We'll cry together.

    (Great chapter...truly gut-wrenching, Tabitha).
Title: Chapter 7: Sometimes You Just Need to Clock Someone 29 May 2009 9:28 am
Reviewer: Lily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting... I'm begining to dislike the weasleys...

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