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Reviews For Lily's Charm: Legacy
This was my favorite part: Without warning, Ginny grabbed Draco’s arm and spun him around. Draco’s wide, silver eyes glinted in the moonlight. Ginny jabbed her wand, which was now lit by a Lumos, close to Draco’s face. “You can just keep your filthy thoughts to yourself, Malfoy, or I’ll hex your mouth closed for you.” Lol, it was so unexpected and vivid; I could really picture Ginny doing that and Draco being totally shocked by her sudden motion. Then poor Severus; you portrayed how frantic he was very well, especially with the description of the flames seemingly burning Harry's mind. You've got me curious about the scroll now--what could it be? A will? It wasn't mentioned last chapter, was it? I might have to go and review... I think the worst part of this was the emotions Harry felt right before Severus burnt the strap. It was almost like he doubted him for a moment and I think Severus noticed. Could Harry have momentarily thought that Severus would do something to him with the strap? I know that would hurt Sev like nothing else, if Harry were to be afraid of him. Hmm...those are just a couple theories though; I'm not too sure about the ending and I have a feeling you left it purposefully ambiguous. Lol, I guess I can't blame you though, as that's one of my favorite things to do with my stories. Good work--I'm looking forward to more! Update soon so I can stop pressing refresh, lol. -P.G. |
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