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Reviews For Lily's Charm: Legacy
I wished with all my heart that nothing would happen between Hermione and Harry. I'm seriously hoping that this doesn't effect Ron and Harry's already battered friendship..or Harry and Hermiones. I'm also hoping that this will not become anything.There is nothing I hate more than Hermione and Harry as a couple. As for Ginny, she better have one heck of an apology ready, I do want them back together though :)The little parts with severus were super cute as alwayss Keep up the awesome workk
Ooh, does Harry feel the same way though? The plot thickens. I love how Severus, is becoming more like his old self now that he's more secure in his relationship with Harry. He's not as hesitant to be stern. I love it. He's the perfect mixture of doting father, mother hen, and strong father figure. Great job as usual Tabitha. I cannot wait to see Harry's face when he sees Ron at his house!! I love it!
Next chapter should be super interesting. I wonder if Ron and George saw what happened. I love how you write the teenage relationships as so natural, but not annoying. I don't even mind Ginny nearly as much as I usually do in fics. I hope Harry didn't mess things up too much between Hermione and himself. She's been like his sole friend his age this summer, and I'd hate for him to lose that. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter and you fest fic.
I have a feeling that Ron of course saw the kiss which will lead to more drama between the trio blah, blah, blah :-) I think I realized this might happen as soon as Ron mentioned waiting outside for Harry. And now not only will Hermione have ruined Harry and Ginny's relationship (she did start the whole problems to begin with honestly) but now may ruin any chance of reconciliation between Harry and Ron. Way to go Hermione :-( I do like Margaret - do I see a future romance with Severus??? They seem like they would make a perfect pair. Poor Remus with his Tonks' job issues. Oh well they can all cry on each others shoulders as romantic troubles are all around lol. Good chapter - I hope you update again soon.
Though, I think my favorite part was Harry falling asleep at the table. It's just those little moments that I am always fond of. ;-) I also liked Harry talking to Severus about Remus. That was cute. Thanks for such a fast update! Looking forward to more. :D
Anyway, I am very curious about what sort of way Harry will receive Ron's apology now that this happened. He might not be in any sort of mindset to forgive and if he tells Ron what happened, the forgiveness might be very short-lived. Snape and Margaret, eh? I do think Severus could use a special someone now, since Harry will be leaving to pursue his adult life in a year. In a way, I can't help but wonder if that's why Severus is acting so overprotective now: he missed so much of Harry's childhood and he knows he only has a year left. I feel very sad about that because had Lily not tricked him, he would have had his son the whole time. So, yeah, I definitely would like to see a bit more Margaret and would like to hear a conversation about her between Harry and Snape. I was so happy to see that you updated quickly and I'm looking forward to more! Please keep them coming! -P.G. |
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