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Reviews For Lily's Charm: Legacy
This was my favorite part: Without warning, Ginny grabbed Draco’s arm and spun him around. Draco’s wide, silver eyes glinted in the moonlight. Ginny jabbed her wand, which was now lit by a Lumos, close to Draco’s face. “You can just keep your filthy thoughts to yourself, Malfoy, or I’ll hex your mouth closed for you.” Lol, it was so unexpected and vivid; I could really picture Ginny doing that and Draco being totally shocked by her sudden motion. Then poor Severus; you portrayed how frantic he was very well, especially with the description of the flames seemingly burning Harry's mind. You've got me curious about the scroll now--what could it be? A will? It wasn't mentioned last chapter, was it? I might have to go and review... I think the worst part of this was the emotions Harry felt right before Severus burnt the strap. It was almost like he doubted him for a moment and I think Severus noticed. Could Harry have momentarily thought that Severus would do something to him with the strap? I know that would hurt Sev like nothing else, if Harry were to be afraid of him. Hmm...those are just a couple theories though; I'm not too sure about the ending and I have a feeling you left it purposefully ambiguous. Lol, I guess I can't blame you though, as that's one of my favorite things to do with my stories. Good work--I'm looking forward to more! Update soon so I can stop pressing refresh, lol. -P.G.
I love all the details you've put in to the particulars of life...the funeral rituals and the roles of the pureblooded families. Quite a collection of guests, what with the Malfoys, Hermione, the Longbottoms, the Quidditch players. I just can't figure Draco out and I'm curious to see what is going to happen with him, if he's trying to change or if he's got something up his sleeve. I love all the father and son interaction with Harry and Severus. The two of them cleaning the lab together after Harry messed the potion was touching to me for some reason, and showed how far their relationship had come. But then it seemed to regress back at the Snape home in the study. I'm guessing being back there, with so many bad memories and right after the funeral was probably having an effect on Severus, whether he realized it or not. And the ending...I do hope Ginny's not about to break up with Harry, poor kid has a lot to deal with as usual. I really am eager for the next chapter. Reading this has brightened my day!
If Harry can't talk to Severus, Ginny or Ron, there's always Hermione. I can see you setting this up, whether you will use it remains to be seen. The ambiguity surrounding Draco is well done. Is he finally growing up enough to see beyond his parents' expectations, or is he once again a tool for his father's questionable machinations?
I wonder if Harry's going to be able to let what his Dad did go; I mean, that's pretty big and Harry might not be as apt to trust Severus with this new development, along with the fact that his Dad is unwilling to talk with him about something so important. I know Severus wants to protect Harry from this reality, but I can tell that this is going to be a source of angst for some time. Is he really going to go to the World Cup with Draco? Maybe it would be good for Harry to hang around someone else and make a different close friend. Then again, maybe being with Draco's a bit like hanging out with the wrong people that Severus was talking about earlier in this fic. Who knows who might show up and talk to Lucius, after all. Great chapter and great timing posting it too--today is my birthday! I was hoping you'd post it today and you did! Thanks for making my day a bit brighter. -P.G.
Oh, I just really hope that Severus and Harry's relationship won't be more damaged by the secrets between them then it would be if Severus just told Harry the truth. Oh, please update soon again, I know I'm greedy, but I'm like someone who's been in the desert for a long time, and only gets a sip of water! It's just a teaser! I want more of this.
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I'm very excited with what you're doing with Levi! That was a great scene--I love how he saved Harry! I also think the idea of him flying side-by-side with Harry on his broomstick is really cute. Good work! -P.G. |
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