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Reviews For Duty
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words. T
The only criticism I really have is that I cannot remember even one instance in canon of Hermione telling Ron and Harry off for not using Snape's title. In fact, she calls him Snape too. It is Dumbles who always admonishes HArry for that, and Molly as well in OOTP. Still, it is a very small thing and all told, the story was very good. Lesley~ Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. I simply didn't have the space to write Molly or Dumbledore into the story, so I chose Hermione instead. Thanks for the review. t
That was a great piece of writing. cannon and yet not... Author's Response: Thanks. I appreciate your review. T
I could kiss you Brilliant Absolutely brilliant Author's Response: Wow, that is the first time someone has threatened to kiss me because of a story. I have my own scary stalker! Squee!!! No, seriously, thank you very much for your kind words. I do appreciate it. T
I really hoped that something would have happened in the book; For Snape...PROFESSOR Snape!(lol) and Harry Potter to be able to finally connect, relate, for Snape to be able to comfort Harry through his pain and sorrow. I loved how you brought this around to ending of DH where Snape commanded, "Look At Me." and Harry remembered everything that happen, and how SNape really did care because he kept the letter that whole entire time. I really do believe, and although JK Rowling didn't show it, that Sev must have cared about Harry in someway and that Harry cared as well. You did a great job in portraying what we all wanted to see. Thankyou so much! ~Clovergirl22 Author's Response: I always thought it was ridiculous how much Snape supposedly hated Harry. If he was Lily's son, it serves to reason that he would have some good feelings for Harry. I wish it could have been different in cannon. I wish at some point before Snape's supposed death that he and Harry could have had just such a moment. Thanks for the kind words and the wonderful review. T
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I like repetitive phrases as devices in short stories. I think they convey a world of ideas with a few words. I'm glad that the Professor Snape bit did it for you. Thanks for the kind words and the support you showed this story. T
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words, and thanks for the review. T
-P.G. Author's Response: You're the first one to mention that 'Look at me' line. I really was proud of tying that scene to the actual cannon one. Thanks.
Thanks for your kind words and for the review.
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Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I really tried to make the cannon and fanfic come together in this story. T
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words. I do appreciate them.
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