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Reviews For Duty
Title: Duty 05 May 2009 10:43 pm
Reviewer: sandfull_a (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant. 'specially the ending. Thank you!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your kind words.

    T

Title: Duty 05 May 2009 9:33 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well written and very sad at the end because our Severus still died. Still, you stuck to canon with that.

    The only criticism I really have is that I cannot remember even one instance in canon of Hermione telling Ron and Harry off for not using Snape's title. In fact, she calls him Snape too. It is Dumbles who always admonishes HArry for that, and Molly as well in OOTP.

    Still, it is a very small thing and all told, the story was very good.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for pointing that out. I  simply didn't have the space to write Molly or Dumbledore into the story, so I chose Hermione instead.

    Thanks for the review.

    t

Title: Duty 04 May 2009 6:58 pm
Reviewer: fictionfan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow.

    That was a great piece of writing.
    cannon and yet not...

    Author's Response:

    Thanks.  I appreciate your review.

    T

Title: Duty 04 May 2009 3:44 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    O.O
    I could kiss you
    Brilliant
    Absolutely brilliant

    Author's Response:

    Wow, that is the first time someone has threatened to kiss me because of a story.  I have my own scary stalker!  Squee!!!

    No, seriously, thank you very much for your kind words.  I do appreciate it.  

    T

Title: Duty 03 May 2009 7:07 pm
Reviewer: Clovergirl22 (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW! I love this!

    I really hoped that something would have happened in the book; For Snape...PROFESSOR Snape!(lol) and Harry Potter to be able to finally connect, relate, for Snape to be able to comfort Harry through his pain and sorrow.

    I loved how you brought this around to ending of DH where Snape commanded, "Look At Me." and Harry remembered everything that happen, and how SNape really did care because he kept the letter that whole entire time.

    I really do believe, and although JK Rowling didn't show it, that Sev must have cared about Harry in someway and that Harry cared as well. You did a great job in portraying what we all wanted to see. Thankyou so much!

    ~Clovergirl22

    Author's Response:

    I always thought it was ridiculous how much Snape supposedly hated Harry.  If he was Lily's son, it serves to reason that he would have some good feelings for Harry. 

    I wish it could have been different in cannon.  I wish at some point before Snape's supposed death that he and Harry could have had just such a moment.

    Thanks for the kind words and the wonderful review.

    T

Title: Duty 03 May 2009 9:41 am
Reviewer: Bil (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great story. I love how you managed to have Snape understand that Harry isn't what he thought and yet make it fit into canon so neatly. Harry's constant *Professor* Snape in the beginning bit was funny. The letter was an interesting idea and I think you used it really well. Snape's attempts to come to terms with this new version of Harry's life was really well done and I loved the mingling of their memories, that was heart-breaking. Great fic!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much.  I like repetitive phrases as devices in short stories. I think they convey a world of ideas with a few words.  I'm glad that the Professor Snape bit did it for you.

    Thanks for the kind words and the support you showed this story. 

    T

Title: Duty 03 May 2009 5:36 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    *sobs* This was so sad! Yet, very creative, good work :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for your kind words, and thanks for the review.

    T

Title: Duty 03 May 2009 12:08 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, that was very good. I love how you tied in the "look at me" and made the whole thing a big secret. What a great read--you describe things so vividly too! I really enjoyed this piece. Good work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    You're the first one to mention that 'Look at me' line.  I really was proud of tying that scene to the actual cannon one. Thanks.

     

    Thanks for your kind words and for the review.

     

    T

Title: Duty 02 May 2009 11:35 pm
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good story. Well written and very believable melding of canon and fanfiction.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I really tried to make the cannon and fanfic come together in this story. T
Title: Duty 02 May 2009 9:18 pm
Reviewer: celeste (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was awesome, but oh, so sad. Good job.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for your kind words.  I do appreciate them.

     

    T


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