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Reviews For Duty
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm a sucker for a happy ending, and I did make this as happy as I could. I just wrote what came to me. Thanks for the kind words.
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Author's Response: He used Harry's owl because she was familiar with the area, and known to be about. (And because that was one of the bits of the challenge, to be honest.) Thank for the kind words.
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Oh my, that was soo moving! I absolutely love it! Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words. This was my first Harry POV.
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My favorite part was about the memories combining, one of Snape's and one of Harry's, and one of snape's.... the description of that was wonderful. If you ever want to go back and rework the beginning, the "sore" head Harry had was the most distracting. I'm not sure that people usually have sore heads,and the word "sore" was repeated a little too often, especially since it was unusual as a description. Well very well done, especially for your first story here! Thanks so much for participating and sharing your story with us! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. t
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was my first time ever writing from Harry's POV. T
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. This is my first ever time writing from Harry's POV. I liked the way the trio interacted in this story. Who knows, I might even write some more Harry/Severus fics. Thanks again. T
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words, and thanks for letting me participate in this fest. I really liked how it turned out. I'm looking forward to reading the other authors works.
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Author's Response: Yes, Severus knows that Harry would give him away. Harry is not a person with a great deal of subterfuge where Snape is concerned. I hated having to follow cannon. I always want Snape to live and to come to an understanding with Harry, but that is where the muse took me. Thanks for the review. T
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. This was my first story from Harry's POV. I really enjoyed writing him. I tried hard to make the memories merging a fluid peice. These two men had so much in common. I'm glad it worked for you. T Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. This was my first story from Harry's POV. I really enjoyed writing him. I tried hard to make the memories merging a fluid peice. These two men had so much in common. I'm glad it worked for you. T
I loved the ending, that at least Harry was able to remember in the end. Bravo! Author's Response: I couldn't imagine Severus, in this story at least, choosing any differently. His most admirable quality, at least to me, is his obligation to duty. Thanks for the kind words. T |
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