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Title: His Son 02 May 2021 8:52 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Nice story, but...
Title: His Son 19 Aug 2020 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant story and loved the ending, thank you
Title: His Son 27 Sep 2014 11:24 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very very good, I loved the ending!
Title: His Son 28 Jul 2014 12:57 am
Reviewer: Dysall75 (Signed) [Report This]
    Who is the father?
Title: His Son 03 Dec 2010 3:49 am
Reviewer: Imai (Signed) [Report This]
    WAIT?!?!
    Who said 'obliviate'??!?!?!
    And who is Harry's father?!?!
    And PLEASE don't give me that stuff about 'Oh, it adds mystery to the story'!
    I have to know!!!
Title: His Son 17 Aug 2010 5:57 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that is just EVIL! I wanted to know who it waaaas! Hmph. Not happy with you. Evil writer person...

    Apart from that - well written! I'd even say I liked it, were it not for the awful ending.

    ...okay, okay, I like it. ^^ Great job!

    Author's Response:

    Well Thank You! I was pretty happy with the way it ended, seeing as I enjoy the endings that make everyone use their imaginations. Honestly, I could not decide which way I wanted it to end, so I that one won.

     It could really be anyone! In my mind it could have been James even for some reason, although I have heard others disregard him.

    I'm glad I frustrated you and you enjoyed it! ^_^ Thank you for reading, too!

Title: His Son 21 Nov 2009 5:30 am
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awe....no!!! How can you do that? Who ended up being Harry's father?
Title: His Son 31 Jul 2009 8:26 am
Reviewer: nameless (Anonymous) [Report This]
    you're very good at writing, extremely good actually. However the ending kind of makes me want to throw my geometry book at you.

    ........it was Severus, wasn't it? Was it? I'm going insane here!
Title: His Son 20 May 2009 1:17 am
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    OK... here is my Logic... the Obliviate makes it clear that it is NOT James' son. If it were, no one would have cause to cast it, as A) James, Padfoot and Mooney would all be happy that it was James', and Severus would not gain anything from an Obliviate (except for sheer pettiness, which, come to think of it, is not beyond him. But I am going to discount that.)

    Given that Harry is not James', we are left with options.

    If Severus were the father, then he would NOT have cast the Obliviate. Sirius or James would have. Mooney would not, just as he was staying out of the fight between Sirius and Severus. He might have done it to protect James, but knowing it would harm Severus makes it less likely for Remus. Sirius would have cast it to protect James, and James would have done it to protect his family, which he already loves. My guess is that if Severus is the father, that James cast the Obliviate.

    If Mooney were the father, I think Mooney would have cast the Obliviate. I think Mooney here is gay, and that he is dealing with not only sleeping with his best friend's sweetheart (now wife), but also sleeping with a woman!! He would not have been ready to deal with it, so he would have cast to protect himself and the Maurader closeness.

    If Sirius were the father, James or Sirius might have cast Obliviate, to protect their friendship and James' family. Sirius was certainly not ready for a son, even though he loved being the godfather.

    It seems the most likely is Severus being the father, and James casting Obliviate.

    But ... other options are possible. Only the author knows... (eery music here.)

    Well, actually, whoever cast the Obliviate knows. Mooney would need to know to watch for Werewolf sign in his child. James would maybe not want to know, but casting Obvliviate on yourself is not a good thing.

    Loved the story. Loved how true you were to the characters in such a situation. Good ending, even if it did leave me frustrated. And Analytical. Caught up in the story.

    Really good job.
Title: His Son 07 May 2009 4:22 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    The first word that came to my mind when I finished readin tis was "Shit!"
    Absolutely effing brilliant!!!

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