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Reviews For His Son
Who said 'obliviate'??!?!?! And who is Harry's father?!?! And PLEASE don't give me that stuff about 'Oh, it adds mystery to the story'! I have to know!!!
Apart from that - well written! I'd even say I liked it, were it not for the awful ending. ...okay, okay, I like it. ^^ Great job! Author's Response: Well Thank You! I was pretty happy with the way it ended, seeing as I enjoy the endings that make everyone use their imaginations. Honestly, I could not decide which way I wanted it to end, so I that one won. It could really be anyone! In my mind it could have been James even for some reason, although I have heard others disregard him. I'm glad I frustrated you and you enjoyed it! ^_^ Thank you for reading, too!
........it was Severus, wasn't it? Was it? I'm going insane here!
Given that Harry is not James', we are left with options. If Severus were the father, then he would NOT have cast the Obliviate. Sirius or James would have. Mooney would not, just as he was staying out of the fight between Sirius and Severus. He might have done it to protect James, but knowing it would harm Severus makes it less likely for Remus. Sirius would have cast it to protect James, and James would have done it to protect his family, which he already loves. My guess is that if Severus is the father, that James cast the Obliviate. If Mooney were the father, I think Mooney would have cast the Obliviate. I think Mooney here is gay, and that he is dealing with not only sleeping with his best friend's sweetheart (now wife), but also sleeping with a woman!! He would not have been ready to deal with it, so he would have cast to protect himself and the Maurader closeness. If Sirius were the father, James or Sirius might have cast Obliviate, to protect their friendship and James' family. Sirius was certainly not ready for a son, even though he loved being the godfather. It seems the most likely is Severus being the father, and James casting Obliviate. But ... other options are possible. Only the author knows... (eery music here.) Well, actually, whoever cast the Obliviate knows. Mooney would need to know to watch for Werewolf sign in his child. James would maybe not want to know, but casting Obvliviate on yourself is not a good thing. Loved the story. Loved how true you were to the characters in such a situation. Good ending, even if it did leave me frustrated. And Analytical. Caught up in the story. Really good job.
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