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Reviews For The Photograph
You did a great job writing this, and I hope to see more stories from you soon.
Harry's reasoning for why he's so set on discrediting Snape is wonderful. His thought that Hogwarts without Snape would be perfect is to me just what Harry would think; it's also so sad, poor boy. I like the idea that Snape spends the anniversary of Lily's death remembering her; that's (dare I say it) sweet. The confrontation between Harry and Snape is great. The unfolding similarities between the two and Snape's understanding of that are well done. And I love the line "His eyes seemed less haunting and more haunted." The quiet handing over of the photo was great; understated, because Snape would never admit to doing something so sympathetic, yet exactly what Harry needed. The ending was great, especially knowing how the canon version of the scene went. I like this one better :) Snape sticking up for Harry! Great stuff. I enjoyed this story. Author's Response: The sheer length of this review makes me deliriously happy. I had to think like a little boy. I tried to take away all rational and thoughts of consequences and just think about immediate action - in other words - think like Harry :) Snape, if I've said it before I apologize, really is a big softie :))). He'sy just a toasted marshmallow. All crunchy and burnt on the outside, and sweet and gooey in the inside. If Snape ever found the records of me saying that, however, I might be glared to death. I'm so glad I seemed to have found a balance between my GUSHYHUGGYSNAPE urges and my SNARKYEVILSNAPE urges. I wanted him to be understated and quietly nice, but snarky and hateable all the same. Thank you!
Author's Response: I'm glad you LIKE it :)))))
Author's Response: Thank you! I've always felt that if Snape only identified with Harry a little more - then everything would have been solved between the two. Well - not everything. But the major bulk of it. Thanks again!
~Frosty Author's Response: I am pandering with the idea of continuing with it once i come by some more time - thank you for the kind review! |
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