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Reviews For The Photograph
Title: The Photograph 07 May 2009 7:05 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, this was an interesting turn of events for CoS. Too bad it isn’t cannon :) *wistful sigh* Seems Harry’s outburst brought on some good things; understanding from Severus and a surprising defense. It was very thoughtful for the professor to give Harry that photo too.

    Author's Response: Ah - but if it it was cannon this website wouldn't exist! I think Snape is a big softy too :))
Title: The Photograph 07 May 2009 6:23 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice. I like how they came to a not-quite understanding. Very well written.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I had to resist the urge to have Snape pop out with adoption papers - :))
Title: The Photograph 07 May 2009 5:25 am
Reviewer: Jell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh this is a very indearing story !!
    well done!

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Title: The Photograph 06 May 2009 9:38 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! I can't blame the students for wondering about Snape...he would be the perfect vampire, lol!

    I loved how Snape realized that he and Harry had some things in common and felt empathy for him, and I hope it can be the start of a better relationship.

    Author's Response:

    Kristeh - let me tell you how much of a turn around this is. I love your fics, and now you're reading mine! So exciting.

    He would be the perfect vampire - quite easy for a kid to think of him soo.

    I hope so too 

    Thank you for the review!

Title: The Photograph 06 May 2009 9:34 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice work! Is this your first fic Adah? I really enjoyed it; there was a very nice combination of angst and humor. I love how Harry had garlic in his pockets and the whole speculation about what was in Snape's mug, lol. I also really enjoyed the part where Malfoy is pretending to take notes while Snape humiliated Potter. The little details make this a very nice fic.

    I got so happy when Snape gave Harry the picture too. The fic could have gotten really sappy right there, but you kept it in context and I really like what you've done with it. Great job!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Its my first time writing in quite a while. That was what i was going for (the combination), so thank you.

    let me tell you, I had strong urges to just let them have a hug fest (the hand on the shoulder was my concession to that desire) but I held back. Majorly

    Thank you again!

     

Title: The Photograph 06 May 2009 8:56 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, bless them. Please, please (maybe, possibly) write a sequel to this - it has such potential for development, especially after Harry kills the Basilisk.

    I loved it when you described Snape leaning over Harry's cauldron like a shepherd's crook - it's such an unusual, visual description, plus it's a very Snapish thing to do. So sweet of him to give Harry the photo! And I like the comparison you made between the two of them - how Hogwarts was the only good place and how Snape had transformed from the victim into the bully: so true.

    Wonderful fic!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I am maybe, possibly planning a sequel.

    Thank you again!

Title: The Photograph 06 May 2009 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh God, I had tears in my eyes, when Harry started crying. I loved how Snape saw himself in Harry, and recognized that Harry didn't have very many photos of his mum.

    Oh, that was so sweet, and I loved the ending.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just wanted to portray something that /could/  (not really) happen in the middle of second year - a time in the plotiline I feel like has such little opportunity for creating completely different sides of the characters.
Title: The Photograph 06 May 2009 6:17 pm
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    Do you how hard it is to explain to curious co-workers why your bawling like a baby at your desk, without giving away the fact that you're reading fics at work?

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! i'll take that as a compliment.

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