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Reviews For A Day to Remember
Title: Chapter 3: Victory 08 May 2009 9:48 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a sweet story! Mila

    Author's Response: Thank you Mila! :)
Title: Chapter 3: Victory 08 May 2009 8:25 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a perfect ending! You did so well writing that Quidditch match. I think I'm jealous. Action scenes are so hard for me and I've got a Quidditch match coming up. Hmm, maybe I'll just send it to you to write for me.... You would like to be a ghost writer, wouldn't you, Pandora?

    Brilliant idea with Draco cheating and the extra Snitches. And I was so happy that Gryffindor won...and that Severus was actually happy about it. I think you deserve bonus points for pulling that off!

    Wonderful ending and I loved the line that Severus was a git, but he was Harry's git. That one had me laughing. Harry needs to get a T-shirt. It could have a pic of Severus on the front and the saying..."He may be a git, but he's my git." Wouldn't you just love to see Severus' face?

    You were fantastic, Pandora! Loved it!

    Author's Response:

    Oh Kristeh, you have no idea how hard that duel and Quidditch scene was for me to write, and how I struggled with it.  There was a knot of anxiety in my tummy for days until I finished writing it. I really didn't know how I was going to do it.  I actually thought of telling Tabitha that it was just too hard for me to do.  That is one of the reasons I really wasn't sure about my story, because I wasn't sure if it came off as being really lame!  Oh, Kristeh, I'm sure that you're Quidditch match will be great.  I thought that you've written some pretty briliant action scenes in your stories.  I'm really excited to read your story.

     I think that Severus had very mixed feelings about winning the match at first, but then pride in his son took over; that and the fact that he put the Malfoy's in their place.

     Love the T-shirt idea.   Yeah, Sev would kill Harry though!

     

    Thanks Kristeh, and I just can't wait to read yours.


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