Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 2 20 May 2009 4:20 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Good job on Harry's mixed emotions. The scene with young Snape and Harry was interesting. I'm really wondering what he makes of the entire situation.

    I do feel sorry for Lily. She absolutely hates James and with good reason.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm actually planning to (hopefully) add something to this universe so that you get a glimpse of both Snapes' point of view, and what they make of everything. Might take a while though... I feel for Lily too! How dare the evil author reveal to her that she's going to marry someone she hates! (muahaha).
Title: Chapter 2 13 May 2009 4:16 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I was glad to see that Harry stood up for young Snape and that james and Sirius got what they deserved from older Snape.

    I also liked how harry lectured the Marauders about how their little "pranks" could actually be harmful.

    Uh oh, the Food Fight sounds like trouble!

    Author's Response: They had it coming on both counts, I think! Harry might have been a little softer on them because they were his father and his friends but that's by the by...
Title: Chapter 2 10 May 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that's sad. Man, Harry's save during class was great--I'm surprised Snape wasn't careful. Then again, James just rubs him the wrong way. I imagine he's been waiting for a moment like that for a long time.

    Very nice writing!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Oh, definitely. I could imagine Snape being on a low boil ever since he caught the Marauders ganging up on his younger self - plus the fact that he hates both James and Sirius with a flaming, purple passion - I daresay James' quick comments were more than enough to push him into being reckless. In other words - thank goodness Harry was around!
Title: Chapter 2 09 May 2009 7:35 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is so brilliant, yet so sad. That wasn't nice of Snape to do that, but Harry shouldn't be cohorting with the Marauders; he'll only end up getting himself in trouble and then when they return to the present , his new-found relationship with Snape will be down the drain. Well at least their new-found understanding.

    Oh, what the heck do they have planned. I hope Harry doesn't get into too much trouble. Yikes!

    Author's Response: Heh heh - the Marauders are certainly trouble personified (moreso than Fred and George if you ask me)! Poor Harry indeed - Snape can be such a nasty idiot sometimes... but at least he has a conscience.
Title: Chapter 2 09 May 2009 6:16 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I hate Dumbledore for thinking that Marauders running rampant is a good joke. Blah. Mila

    Author's Response: Ah, but if I'd written him any other way, we wouldn't have had a story... (!) But I totally agree - how it could end in anything other than disaster seems impossible.

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