Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 4 13 May 2009 4:24 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the part with young Sev and Lily, so very funny when they got thrown out of the library and Sev and Lily were discussing how Lily could still have Harry and NOT be married to James--too funny!

    I can't believe Dumbledore though! Doesn;t he realize how dangerous it is for a time traveler to remain in a time not his own? What about paradoxes? And where would Harry live after school is over? It would totally screw things up.

    Now of course, Harry has gotten himself into hot water again! Hurry Severus and save his ass, please!

    Author's Response:

    Well, I could so easily see them doing that - especially a younger Lily. I think Dumbledore had something in mind along the lines of hiding Harry away until he was back to his own time... a bit ridiculous for a growing boy, but very useful for advancing the war effort! Or maybe Polyjuicing or glamouring him into someone else... Not one of his more brilliant ideas though!

Title: Chapter 4 10 May 2009 11:46 am
Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What does ' “...” ' mean? Is it a miss-type or an error of some sort? Are you having trouble formatting your story?

    Author's Response: No, it was purposeful - I was writing the whole scene through conversation, so the "..." indicated silence. I suppose I could remove the quotations... I'll go and have a look.
Title: Chapter 4 10 May 2009 2:46 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Good thing this isn't a cliffie because it would drive me nuts! I'm excited to see where this baby is headed!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: I was tempted, I was very, very tempted... :D
Title: Chapter 4 09 May 2009 7:23 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, that must be hard for Snape the younger to hear that Lily will be living happily with James and will have Harry together. I am surprised he stays outside with them instead of licking his wounds in private - I mean, the whole his hopes just crumbled, right? On the other hand, maybe young Severus is leaving himself notes or letters, so that he would not forget everything once Dumbledore makes them forget. Mmmm. Possibilities, possibilities. *went to read next* Mila

    Author's Response: I know - I just wanted to hug him when I wrote him. Poor Severus indeed... But I think he'd have done anything for Lily before the 'Mudblood' incident.

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