Talk about cliff-hanger!! wow. well done.
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Good grief! Harry's pain is palpable.
Oh, my. What an intense beginning! Poor guy.
Well written. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: I hope you will like the rest as well!
No, don't do it! I hope someone finds him before he lands or something. You did a great job with this first chapter, it was very poignant and sad and I hope that Harry learns to value the life he has. Poor thing!
Author's Response: I wrote this chapter in a very hard time for myself and just wanted to let it stay as a one-shot. But my life changed again and I felt like continuing this in a more positive way. The rest of the fic won't be so negative. I hope you will like it! Thank you for your review!
| Title: Chapter 1 – The Tower
| 11 May 2009 8:03 am
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| Reviewer: Ophelia (Anonymous)
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Ah!!! I need more NOW!!! >.< Its really good so far. I cant wait for the next chaper to come out!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Very heavy subject matter, but I'm impressed that you've written it so well, especially since English is not your first language.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I hope you will like the rest of the story as well.
Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 1 – The Tower
| 10 May 2009 12:02 am
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| Reviewer: tonks*is*cool (Anonymous)
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This is so sad, but you explain the cutting and Harry´s guilt, agony and hopelesness really well.
ok I KNOW that he will be rescued, somehow ... in the next chapter, so please update soon ;-)
Author's Response: Already updated. :) Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 1 – The Tower
| 09 May 2009 10:01 pm
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Ok, I'm hooked on your story. Great Chapter, can't wait for next post.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
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