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Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 29 Jul 2010 8:11 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Bwahahaha! Poor Severus would die of mortification. ^^

    I really liked this chapter. I knew this tale is dealing with things that are a bit dark, but it's good to see a bit of humor in it, nevertheless.

    Wonderfully writ!

    Author's Response: :D Thank you very much for your review!! :hug:
Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 07 Nov 2009 7:50 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Um... this is getting a little strange. It was weird to begin with that they wanted Harry in the bed... seeing as how that IS a little inappropriate for his age, but then to say that Severus shares their bed as well? That is definitely too weird for me. It almost makes it sound like a forced threesome with Snape there... sorry, just my opinion.

    Author's Response:

    No problem. Everyone is free to have their own opinion. It's definitely isn't any kind of threesome. For Poppy and Alastor they are just like their kids. Just to mention it: I had to sleep in a big bed with some of my girls in the children shelter when we where on a journey and it was nothing sexual and I'm 100% sure that nobody even thought about something like this. I prefer to avoid it but if it is necessary I have no problem with it. MAybe we are just more open here. Maybe it is a differnet of what is common in different countries. I have to admit that i wouldn't do this with male kids or at least not when no male adult is there as well. (but that also would be a threesome for you) Poppy sees Severus and Harry as her kids and so she doesn't see a problem with it. She has a permanetly control over their health this way without haveing to spend the time in the hospital wing.

    It doesn't play a big role in the whole fic.  I just wanted to try to explain to you that it isn't anything sexual.

Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 29 May 2009 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Snape isn't going to be too horrible to Harry. I wonder what he did to himself too, to get taken in by Poppy and Alastor. This is good writing--nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: All your questions will be answered in later chapters! :)
Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 21 May 2009 1:17 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love it the other story is still my favorite. but this is a close second.

    Author's Response: Yes, this story here is a little hard to get warm with if you don't know my other stories (beside Harry and his new family). Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 14 May 2009 1:08 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, so I know that Snape is probably their son or something, but that sounds bad, that he slept in their bed. I love Harry's thoughts on that. Too cute.

    I'm happy Harry is feeling wanted and cared for now.

    Author's Response: He was in a very bad shape when this happened. It was for monitoring. Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 13 May 2009 9:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, does this mean that Severus will be Harry's brother? Great idea, and I have never seen if before with Pomfrey and Moody as the parents. Very, very unique and interesting!! I am very intrigued and looking forward to reading more! Good job so far!

    Author's Response: Yes, they will be brothers. You will soon find out more. I'm glad you like it so far. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 13 May 2009 7:14 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This is getting very interesting. Are Poppy and Alastor married? Have they sort of adopted Severus as well as Harry?

    I really liked how Alastor comforted harry, it was sweet.

    Hope my questions will be answered soon.

    Author's Response:

    Almost all your questions will be answered in the next chapters. I will upload the next one tomorrow when I'm back from work. I never thought about them being married. I live in Germany and I'm not religious and so it doesn't matter for me. But I know that in the US people are a little picky about this topic and so I have to think about letting them be married, right? I could let them celebrate anniversary in a chapter. :) As for the Alstor/Poppy-Severus realtionship, you just have to wait for the next chapters because there it will be explained.

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 13 May 2009 5:08 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter. I am glad harry has a home. Now I just have to get used to Alastor, Sev and Harry in bed together, too funny. I am hooked on your story, can't wait for next post.

    Author's Response: Next one will be up tomorrow! :) Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 - New Guardians 12 May 2009 7:54 pm
Reviewer: christy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really liked this story, but want to know why you have 8 chapters up on fanfiction and 3 on this site? Cant wait till you update, you left chapter 8 on a clift hanger !!!!!

    Author's Response:

    I first didn't plan on submitting this story here! Chapter 9 is already at my beta, but she needs time. Therefore I will update here each day until I'm up to date with fanction(dot)net. But I have to warn you. Chapter 9 will end with a even worse cliffy. Sorry that I'm a little cruel to my readers lately.

    Thanks for reviewing here is as well.

     


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