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Reviews For The Final Breeze
I really liked this chapter. I knew this tale is dealing with things that are a bit dark, but it's good to see a bit of humor in it, nevertheless. Wonderfully writ! Author's Response: :D Thank you very much for your review!! :hug:
Author's Response: No problem. Everyone is free to have their own opinion. It's definitely isn't any kind of threesome. For Poppy and Alastor they are just like their kids. Just to mention it: I had to sleep in a big bed with some of my girls in the children shelter when we where on a journey and it was nothing sexual and I'm 100% sure that nobody even thought about something like this. I prefer to avoid it but if it is necessary I have no problem with it. MAybe we are just more open here. Maybe it is a differnet of what is common in different countries. I have to admit that i wouldn't do this with male kids or at least not when no male adult is there as well. (but that also would be a threesome for you) Poppy sees Severus and Harry as her kids and so she doesn't see a problem with it. She has a permanetly control over their health this way without haveing to spend the time in the hospital wing. It doesn't play a big role in the whole fic. I just wanted to try to explain to you that it isn't anything sexual.
-P.G. Author's Response: All your questions will be answered in later chapters! :)
Author's Response: Yes, this story here is a little hard to get warm with if you don't know my other stories (beside Harry and his new family). Thank you for your review!
I'm happy Harry is feeling wanted and cared for now. Author's Response: He was in a very bad shape when this happened. It was for monitoring. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Yes, they will be brothers. You will soon find out more. I'm glad you like it so far. Thank you very much for your review!
I really liked how Alastor comforted harry, it was sweet. Hope my questions will be answered soon. Author's Response: Almost all your questions will be answered in the next chapters. I will upload the next one tomorrow when I'm back from work. I never thought about them being married. I live in Germany and I'm not religious and so it doesn't matter for me. But I know that in the US people are a little picky about this topic and so I have to think about letting them be married, right? I could let them celebrate anniversary in a chapter. :) As for the Alstor/Poppy-Severus realtionship, you just have to wait for the next chapters because there it will be explained. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Next one will be up tomorrow! :) Thank you for your review!
Author's Response: I first didn't plan on submitting this story here! Chapter 9 is already at my beta, but she needs time. Therefore I will update here each day until I'm up to date with fanction(dot)net. But I have to warn you. Chapter 9 will end with a even worse cliffy. Sorry that I'm a little cruel to my readers lately. Thanks for reviewing here is as well.
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