| Title: Chapter 5 - New Problems
| 06 Sep 2014 4:45 pm
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| Reviewer: songminah (Anonymous)
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really really pretty ^^
thank you for your amazing work :)
Poor guy. He's sure having a rough time of it, isn't he?
Good chapter.
Author's Response: Ah, so you are back reading! :) Yes, he will have a rough time in this story.
I think you describe panic very well; I really enjoyed reading Harry's reactions to waking up in ch.2 and his hyperventilation scene here. They were fast-paced and realistic. Great job!
-P.G.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the way I wrote about the panick attack!
Great story so far xxx
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 5 - New Problems
| 16 May 2009 3:08 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw poor Harry, he just never gets a break, does he? Severus really blows hot and cold. Harry doesn't know how to act or react .
Nice chappie. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Next chapter will be up tomorrow.
Aww, poor Harry! He's lucky that Poppy, Severus and Alastor knew what to do since panic attacks are scary.
Severus reminded me of my dad, who can be a real grouch first thing in the morning before he's had a cup of coffee.
Great story so far.
Author's Response: Oh, you commented twice. I didn't even know that this is possible. Thanks again!
Wow, that wa ssome panic attack! I felt really bad for Harry there, but luckily he had people who knew what to do and help him. I thought Severus's grouchiness was funny, it reminds me of my dad who can be a real bear in the mornings before he's had a cup of coffee.
Author's Response: Yes, I know people like this as well. :) Thank you for your review!
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