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Title: Chapter 15 – Albus’ Visit 29 Jul 2010 11:03 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh... dark gray fur... *wheels churn in head* You were deliberately ambiguous, weren't you? So many things could have that color fur...

    Author's Response: Hahaha, yes, I knew the readers would have a hard time guessing. :)
Title: Chapter 15 – Albus’ Visit 28 Jul 2009 3:30 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Dark gray fur? Maybe a cat? My cat had charcoal gray fur.

    I liked how Albus told Harry that he was right to convince Severus. What a strange illness. It almost sounds like mono.

    It's sad that Harry has to put his life on hold just to kill a crazy mass murderer.

    Author's Response:

    No, cat! You will se soon!

    You also will find out more about Haryy's illness and the trying to convince Severus not to die will be a main part in this story.

    Thank you very much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 15 – Albus’ Visit 26 Jul 2009 11:51 pm
Reviewer: cammy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pleeeaaase update soon again. Just because not so many people leave a review doesn't mean that they have lost their interest in your story. I am such a lazy reviewer myself:-) Please, don't abandon this story - it is one of my favorites.
    Love,
    Cammy

    Author's Response:

    I won't abandon this story, but it is a bit frustrating when you try to make it a good chapter and only get one review on it. Reviews are important for my motivation. Even if it is just saying "I'm still reading and like it" or something similar.

    Thank you for your review! 

Title: Chapter 15 – Albus’ Visit 26 Jul 2009 5:22 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – Albus’ Visit 19 Jul 2009 3:12 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is bad. It sounds like Harry's plan is going to be thwarted.

    That was sweet though when Harry asked if he could still live there after the war, and Poppy assured him that he would still have a home there.

    I'm worried about Severus though.

    Looking foward to the next chappie.

    Author's Response:

    Wow that was the first time I had to use a dictionary for translating a review! I never had heard of 'thwarted'. Thanks for teaching me something new. :)

    It seems that the readers aren't interested in this story but I will update it for you soon!


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