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Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 31 Jan 2016 6:46 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    "Congratulations on becoming a man, Harry..." rofl!!! -snortgigglesnort- That was too funny... lol!

    --his
Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 12 May 2011 4:02 am
Reviewer: Summer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh ****! I forgot to log on. I'll just reveiw now and not waste my time on logging on. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for you review!
Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 29 Jul 2010 11:48 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! I liked the little moment between Harry and Severus. It was very nice. ^^

    Nice chapter!

    Author's Response: They are two great characters to write together.
Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 31 Jul 2009 1:25 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 29 Jul 2009 4:42 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 28 Jul 2009 2:08 pm
Reviewer: Cammy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey grugster. Great chapter. I loved the Albus/Harry training interaction. Now I'm also VERY curious about Harry's animagus form.
    Your description of the twilight-sphere was similar to one I have seen in a movie ("Nightwatch"). I really like your idea that the twilight can be accessed as a means of diversion and assassination.
    I hope that Alastor will make an appearance in the next chapter - due to reading your story I am starting to like him:-)
    Thank you so much for the update and for devoting your time to write for other people's entertainment.
    Love,
    Cammy

    Author's Response:

    First, thank you very much for this encouraging review! I needed it very much.

    Yes, I got the idea about the twilight from the Night Watch book series! Only that I left out the many layers the twilight has in this books. 

    Alastor is a main character in almost all my stories. You can find more on fanfiction(dot)net if you are interested. I have the same account name there. And yes, he will play a main role in the next chapter!

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 28 Jul 2009 7:36 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I am so glad that Harry and Severus are talking again. they need to be close, I think that they need each other. love the dynamics in this story. Thanks so much for updating and sharing it with us!

    Author's Response: No, I have to thank you SO much for reviewing. I feared the story became boring for my readers and I needed some encouraging reviews like yours to go on! Thank you for it!

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