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Reviews For The Final Breeze
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Nice chapter! Author's Response: They are two great characters to write together.
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Your description of the twilight-sphere was similar to one I have seen in a movie ("Nightwatch"). I really like your idea that the twilight can be accessed as a means of diversion and assassination. I hope that Alastor will make an appearance in the next chapter - due to reading your story I am starting to like him:-) Thank you so much for the update and for devoting your time to write for other people's entertainment. Love, Cammy Author's Response: First, thank you very much for this encouraging review! I needed it very much. Yes, I got the idea about the twilight from the Night Watch book series! Only that I left out the many layers the twilight has in this books. Alastor is a main character in almost all my stories. You can find more on fanfiction(dot)net if you are interested. I have the same account name there. And yes, he will play a main role in the next chapter! Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: No, I have to thank you SO much for reviewing. I feared the story became boring for my readers and I needed some encouraging reviews like yours to go on! Thank you for it! |
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