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Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 30 Jul 2010 2:22 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    CONSTANT VIGILANCE! LOL. Who could ever forget? ^^ Loved the training session.


    Re: Review of Chapter 13: No, no, the chapter title was fine (though, I hadn't remembered it). The "Come again?" was in direct response to the last line of the chapter, or rather, what I'd imagine Harry's first thought would be. It's kinda like, erm, "Excuse me?" or "Could you repeat that?"

    Sorry for not being clearer. English is my mother tongue and I *still* don't make any sense sometimes. LOL

    Author's Response:

    Ah, now I understand. Thanks for explaineing it!

    Yes, the traing sesion was a good scene. It's my only story that contains action and it was very hard for me to write it.

Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 12 Sep 2009 6:01 pm
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 09 Sep 2009 12:39 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    You won't lose me as a reader. This is a
    ost excellent fic and worth waiting on. Fabulous interaction between characters in this chapter especially. Bravo!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 11:20 am
Reviewer: Cammy (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think you need to worry - we readers can be patient if we have to be and our reward for waiting are excellent chaps like this one. I really love the Harry/Sev/Alastor bonding-moments in this chapter.

    Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 11:12 am
Reviewer: Sheila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It doesn't matter how long the updates of your stories take - they are always worth the wait!! Great chapter - I love your stories!!!

    Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 8:52 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I understand that things take time! I love the story and want to see it continue. Also with Cherokee Camp and especially Harry's new family. Either way, upload without the betas or we wait, either way, please don't give up the stories.

    Author's Response:

    Oh. no, I wouldn't upload without a beta. You would not like it. :)

    I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 8:14 am
Reviewer: saturns_fire (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this story & your others, they are very well written & definitely are keeping me interested!
    I have waited years to read the end of a story if I like it, so don't worry people will keep reading if you keep posting:>}
    Saturn

    Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 6:47 am
Reviewer: Terrafria (Signed) [Report This]
    i have stories faved that havent updatedin almost a year now.. A few weeks is nothing to wait. at least you keep posting!

    Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 4:43 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    We would never leave you dear.

    Great chapter. I'm so glad that training is going so well for Harry finally. I love how Severus teased Harry.

    Update when you can, Snapegirl is right, your readers will wait for you.

    Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 3:10 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a good chapter. I liked how both Severus and Alastor trained Harry and had him make the most of his magic and the spells that he had learned. I always thought that Harry's lack of training in the books was a great handicap. He should have been trained from the beginning.

    I like what Severus said about using Occlumency in Harry's Animagus form. That's an interesting concept. But isn't it too soon for Harry to learn that and undergo the extraction? One day doesn't seem like too much time.

    Don't worry about losing readers because you can't update quick enough. If a reader likes a story then they will wait and be patient for you to update. (Like I do)

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry has hardly time but Severus knows that Voldemorts attck will come soon. That's the reason why he pushs him so hard.

    I'm relieved to hear that you are still reading. Thank you very much for your review!


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