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Reviews For The Final Breeze
Re: Review of Chapter 13: No, no, the chapter title was fine (though, I hadn't remembered it). The "Come again?" was in direct response to the last line of the chapter, or rather, what I'd imagine Harry's first thought would be. It's kinda like, erm, "Excuse me?" or "Could you repeat that?" Sorry for not being clearer. English is my mother tongue and I *still* don't make any sense sometimes. LOL Author's Response: Ah, now I understand. Thanks for explaineing it! Yes, the traing sesion was a good scene. It's my only story that contains action and it was very hard for me to write it.
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ost excellent fic and worth waiting on. Fabulous interaction between characters in this chapter especially. Bravo! Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Oh. no, I wouldn't upload without a beta. You would not like it. :) I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
I have waited years to read the end of a story if I like it, so don't worry people will keep reading if you keep posting:>} Saturn Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
Great chapter. I'm so glad that training is going so well for Harry finally. I love how Severus teased Harry. Update when you can, Snapegirl is right, your readers will wait for you. Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
I like what Severus said about using Occlumency in Harry's Animagus form. That's an interesting concept. But isn't it too soon for Harry to learn that and undergo the extraction? One day doesn't seem like too much time. Don't worry about losing readers because you can't update quick enough. If a reader likes a story then they will wait and be patient for you to update. (Like I do) Author's Response: Yes, Harry has hardly time but Severus knows that Voldemorts attck will come soon. That's the reason why he pushs him so hard. I'm relieved to hear that you are still reading. Thank you very much for your review! |
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