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Title: Chapter 22 - More Training 30 Jul 2010 2:35 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I hate it when people point out stuff like that! I don't always enunciate my words properly, and back in high school one of my classmates made certain that I knew I was saying "wif" instead of "with". Couldn't say anything without scrutinizing every word for, like, a week! I think I still don't say it right, actually...

    Good chap.

    Author's Response: Yes, it often gets worse when people point out thinks like that. :(
Title: Chapter 22 - More Training 20 Sep 2009 6:04 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm reviewing, I'm reviewing!!! LOL!!

    Sorry, it's a little late, but with work, there is not much time to read!

    Great chappie, and I shivered at Alastor's threat. My goodness, they treat Severus like a child, the two of them!!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, they do. :)

    Thank you very much for your detailed review!

Title: Chapter 22 - More Training 17 Sep 2009 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Sheila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Alastor can be just as scary as he can be hilarious!!! Loved the chapter!! Thanks for the update.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 22 - More Training 17 Sep 2009 7:15 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting very interesting *strokes beard* lol brilliant chapter update soon

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 22 - More Training 17 Sep 2009 9:42 am
Reviewer: missy1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter really reminded me of a family, Sev and Harry like annoying brothers testing "dad", can't wait for next post.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 22 - More Training 17 Sep 2009 3:19 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    great, need more.....very greedy reader

    Author's Response: I hope I will be able to upload the next chapter soon. It seems my beta has more time now. Thank you for your review!

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