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Reviews For The Final Breeze
I like what Severus said about using Occlumency in Harry's Animagus form. That's an interesting concept. But isn't it too soon for Harry to learn that and undergo the extraction? One day doesn't seem like too much time. Don't worry about losing readers because you can't update quick enough. If a reader likes a story then they will wait and be patient for you to update. (Like I do) Author's Response: Yes, Harry has hardly time but Severus knows that Voldemorts attck will come soon. That's the reason why he pushs him so hard. I'm relieved to hear that you are still reading. Thank you very much for your review!
I think it was funny how Alastor still thinks of Sev as a kid. I suppose it has to do with the fact that he sees Severus as a son too, like Harry. Author's Response: Old people sometimes think their children and grandchildren still are like kids compared to them. :) Thank you very much for your review!
I also like how protective they all are of Harry. Author's Response: I thought it was fitting for Alastor, and I would love it it would be this way. :) Thank you very much for your review!
That was a great bonding/training session between Alastor, Severus and Harry xxx 9/10 Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
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Update soon Author's Response: I'm very glad you are still reading! Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it! Thank you very much for your review!
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