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Reviews For The Final Breeze
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 3:10 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a good chapter. I liked how both Severus and Alastor trained Harry and had him make the most of his magic and the spells that he had learned. I always thought that Harry's lack of training in the books was a great handicap. He should have been trained from the beginning.

    I like what Severus said about using Occlumency in Harry's Animagus form. That's an interesting concept. But isn't it too soon for Harry to learn that and undergo the extraction? One day doesn't seem like too much time.

    Don't worry about losing readers because you can't update quick enough. If a reader likes a story then they will wait and be patient for you to update. (Like I do)

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry has hardly time but Severus knows that Voldemorts attck will come soon. That's the reason why he pushs him so hard.

    I'm relieved to hear that you are still reading. Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 20 – The Final Horcrux 08 Sep 2009 3:04 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds very dangerous but necessary to extract the Horcrux. I think Harry should be able to do it.

    I think it was funny how Alastor still thinks of Sev as a kid. I suppose it has to do with the fact that he sees Severus as a son too, like Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Old people sometimes think their children and grandchildren still are like kids compared to them. :)

    Thank you very much for your review!  

Title: Chapter 19 – New Plans 08 Sep 2009 2:55 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That is a very interesting view of the afterlife and of the hellhounds than the one I grew up with. I like it.

    I also like how protective they all are of Harry.

    Author's Response:

    I thought it was fitting for Alastor, and I would love it it would be this way. :)

    Thank you very much for your review!  

Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 2:40 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am still here grugster, waiting paitiently for the chapters to come xx

    That was a great bonding/training session between Alastor, Severus and Harry xxx

    9/10

    Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 2:28 am
Reviewer: Chereche (Signed) [Report This]
    aww...no fear, I'd never abandon this story because of slow updates once I know you plan on continuing it. Its to good for me to do that!

    Author's Response: I'm relieved to hear that. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 2:00 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm always happy to see an update to one of your stories. It was nice to see Harry feeling productive by the end of this chapter.

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 08 Sep 2009 12:39 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was so excited when i found you posted a new chapter. By the way was well worth waiting for can't wait for more.
    Update soon

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you are still reading! Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 20 – The Final Horcrux 27 Aug 2009 2:53 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 20 – The Final Horcrux 24 Aug 2009 3:26 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter...Alastor and Albus showdown was great!!

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it! Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 20 – The Final Horcrux 23 Aug 2009 10:39 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter
    Update soon

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it! Thank you very much for your review!

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