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Title: Chapter 24 – The Other View 27 Dec 2010 5:03 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awww i love seeing how protective Snape is it is so sweet to see

    Author's Response: :D Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 28 – Plans 30 Jul 2010 6:53 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Bravo! *applauds*

    A very enjoyable tale. Thank you so much for sharing! I'll definitely check out the sequel sometime. ^^

    Author's Response: I personally think that is my best story. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 27 – The Final Battle 30 Jul 2010 6:42 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ew... Voldie blood. >.< Blegh!

    Great chapter. Almost don't wanna read the next one, 'cos then it'll be over. :(

    Author's Response: :D
Title: Chapter 26 – Coming Back 30 Jul 2010 6:32 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. Ouch. My hands ache, now. Poor, Severus, poor, poor guy...

    Good thinking on Alastor's part, putting up the wards. Clearly, he must know Harry.

    Good chapter. (Owww... >.-)

    Author's Response: Yes, Alastor knows 'his' kids.
Title: Chapter 25 – The Inevitable 30 Jul 2010 6:23 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    *joins in the cry-a-thon* Don't go, Severus! Don't goooo!

    *cough* Um, I mean, good chapter. *sniffle* Yeah.

    Author's Response: :D
Title: Chapter 24 – The Other View 30 Jul 2010 3:49 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I really do love the Harry and Severus moments. Well writ. ^^

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your reviews!
Title: Chapter 23 – The Horcrux 30 Jul 2010 2:44 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Huzzah! Success. Yippee! ^^

    Author's Response: :D
Title: Chapter 22 - More Training 30 Jul 2010 2:35 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I hate it when people point out stuff like that! I don't always enunciate my words properly, and back in high school one of my classmates made certain that I knew I was saying "wif" instead of "with". Couldn't say anything without scrutinizing every word for, like, a week! I think I still don't say it right, actually...

    Good chap.

    Author's Response: Yes, it often gets worse when people point out thinks like that. :(
Title: Chapter 21 - New Hope 30 Jul 2010 2:22 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    CONSTANT VIGILANCE! LOL. Who could ever forget? ^^ Loved the training session.


    Re: Review of Chapter 13: No, no, the chapter title was fine (though, I hadn't remembered it). The "Come again?" was in direct response to the last line of the chapter, or rather, what I'd imagine Harry's first thought would be. It's kinda like, erm, "Excuse me?" or "Could you repeat that?"

    Sorry for not being clearer. English is my mother tongue and I *still* don't make any sense sometimes. LOL

    Author's Response:

    Ah, now I understand. Thanks for explaineing it!

    Yes, the traing sesion was a good scene. It's my only story that contains action and it was very hard for me to write it.

Title: Chapter 20 – The Final Horcrux 30 Jul 2010 1:26 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah, that would be hard on the hope front. Poor guy. Love the exchange between Alastor and Albus

    Author's Response: Yes, they are two very powerful wizards. It must be cool and a bit scary to see them in  a fight.

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