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Reviews For The Final Breeze
I read through your story today and I liked it very much. I look forward to a sequel and I think, I will read an other of your story's while waiting. Kuroi PS: Is there is any spelling mistake in here, blame my dictionary and the auto-correcting function of Google Chrome. I'm not capable of writing English in the middle of the night specially not in my holidays. Author's Response: English isn't my mother tongue and so don't worry about mistakes. I really hope you will read more of my stories. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: No problem. Everyone is free to have their own opinion. It's definitely isn't any kind of threesome. For Poppy and Alastor they are just like their kids. Just to mention it: I had to sleep in a big bed with some of my girls in the children shelter when we where on a journey and it was nothing sexual and I'm 100% sure that nobody even thought about something like this. I prefer to avoid it but if it is necessary I have no problem with it. MAybe we are just more open here. Maybe it is a differnet of what is common in different countries. I have to admit that i wouldn't do this with male kids or at least not when no male adult is there as well. (but that also would be a threesome for you) Poppy sees Severus and Harry as her kids and so she doesn't see a problem with it. She has a permanetly control over their health this way without haveing to spend the time in the hospital wing. It doesn't play a big role in the whole fic. I just wanted to try to explain to you that it isn't anything sexual.
Don't forget to edit the story's information to mark it as completed, and make sure that you delete the "END" at the bottom of this chapter. Chapters have "To be continued..." or "The End" showing up automatically at the end. If you leave it on you will have two. Author's Response: I don#t know if it will just be a one-shot or again a chaptered story. I can't even decide where they will spend their vacation yet. Thanks for telling me about the THE END problem and that I forgot about declaring it ascompleted. I changed it now. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The next and final chapter will be uploaded in a few hours. I also have already plot for a sequel! Thank you very much for your review! |
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