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Title: Chapter 1: A Father's Suffering 18 May 2009 1:00 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, dear. It is way too sad thinking about Harry being depressed and alone except for Al. Ginny, James and Lily are gone, are they?

    Don't know if I will be able to keep reading because I see even more misery on the horizon, what with the story being called 'Suffering' and all. Doesn't sound as if there is a chance of a reprieve for poor HArry.

    Hasn't the poor guy suffered enough? You must have depressed yourself writing this chapter. I so hope it gets a bit happier.

    Very well written, though, PG. The subject matter is the problem for me. Still, I will see what chapter 2 is like.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Hi Lesley, thanks for reading!  I'm glad you were able to hang in there and read the five chapters I've gotten out.  I'm sorry if made you depressed with it; it is a hard topic to write, and really, Harry has suffered enough in his life.  However, this was my topic for the Challenge Fest and I wanted to make the most out of it.  I personally, as the author, see it more as a mystery than a tragedy, but that's because I've spent most of my time thinking about when I want to be sneaky in the text.  It really is a tragedy though, but I hope you can find some sort of enjoyment in it nonetheless.

    -P.G. 

Title: Chapter 1: A Father's Suffering 12 May 2009 6:35 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that was really intense. I guess young Al is a Healer and maybe a kind of wizard elderly caretaker here? I'm eagert to find out what happened to make Harry so wounded and what happened to Al to not want him to get close to Vivian.

    I like how you describe the other patients there, I've been in many a nursing home and some of the patients there were like this--it was very realistic.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the nice compliments--I'm glad you found the nursing home realistic.  I spent a lot of time in one for a few years while my great grandparents were there, so I have a pretty good idea about what goes on.  Al is a healer of sorts here in this story, though I've coined him a nurse and not a Mediwizard for a reason (maybe I should have used the word Healer for him...I'll have to think about that).  Anyways, I'm not going to say much more because I don't want to give away my plot here, but thank you so much for reading!

    -P.G. 

Title: Chapter 1: A Father's Suffering 10 May 2009 6:52 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! I knew that it would be brilliant, and it is. You truly are a gifted writer PG.

    Oh poor Harry. I'm guessing that it's Snape in that room? Oh, how awful. Or maybe I'm wrong. Maybe the DeathEater is .

    I can't wait to read the next chapter, and I'm glad that despite it not being finished, that we have the honour to read your story.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Pandora--your reviews always make me feel so good. :D  I'm not going to say much about the story because I don't want to give anything away, but I'm glad you're reading it!

    -P.G. 


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