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Title: Chapter 6: A Family's Suffering 05 Jun 2009 6:09 pm
Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww! Poor Harry. Poor Snape; That's the saddest cut of all for him, losing control that way, and I don't think he likes it one bit.

    Author's Response:

    Hey, thanks for reading.  I do feel quite badly for Snape and his lack of control with his Legilimency powers.  I'm sure that is a big blow for him, though he certainly isn't going to talk to Harry about how upset he is over it.  It's all a part of getting old for him though.  Thanks again for supporting my writing!

    -P.G. 

Title: Chapter 6: A Family's Suffering 05 Jun 2009 5:07 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, every chapter makes my cry. That's an enormous compliment, my dear, that your spin on the characters touch me so very deeply.

    I felt like Albus, sitting on that floor, listening in on the conversation. One of the things I was so very happy about is that Snape got to have a life post Hogwarts. Yay!

    The scene of Ginny's death was written so vividly that the horror of it was just palpable. I can now feel some real sympathy for Lily; I really hope they can bring their family together again.

    Thanks for the new chapter, P.G. It was SO worth the wait.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your wonderful compliments, Cathy.  You've made me feel very good about this story and I'm really glad you're enjoying it.

    I was actually a bit concerned at having so much dialogue here without descriptions of what was going on.  However, I really don't think Harry and Severus would have been as open if Albus was there with them.  Also, every Harry Potter fic needs a little eavesdropping!  It's one of those staples in J.K.'s writing that just keeps happening over and over.  I'm glad you liked that part.

    Ginny's death was rather depressing, but I'm glad you found some sympathy for Lily.  Like Albus, she just wants to forget it ever happened and having been there herself, I think she has every right to be horrified about what happened.  My lips are sealed about the fate of the family, but you'll definitely get some hints next chapter. 

    Thanks again for reading, Cathy; your comments have put a smile on my face.

    -P.G. 

Title: Chapter 6: A Family's Suffering 05 Jun 2009 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! Severus actually gave Harry some good advice, though it is always a lot harder to do it. I'm still very sorry for Albus, too, but hopeful that perhaps things can work out after all.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  Severus' advice is a lot easier said than done, but I think it is doable and hopefully over time our boys will recover a bit.  Thanks again for reading!

    -P.G. 


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