Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 02 Dec 2021 10:50 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the start. I’m hooked.
Title: Chapter 1 20 May 2009 5:54 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh cripes, what have Helga and Rowena done? This is a very interesting start; I think I'm going to like this one.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter 1 13 May 2009 4:43 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What a great beginning. I like how you portray the Founders, especially Salazar. Oddly enough I agree with his concern, because back then there were witch hunts and the Church was rabid about stamping out any hint of witchcraft, I studied a lot of history and the hunting witches bit kept reoccurring for centuries, making Sal's concern a valid point. And just what is the ratio of Muggles to wizards anyway? Probably they are vastly outnumbered. A strong muggle army could wipe them out if they're not careful. Perhaps they could swear the Muggle born families to secrecy? Then they wouldn;t need to worry about someone talking and maybe betraying them.

    Can't wait to see how they handle this one!
Title: Chapter 1 12 May 2009 12:52 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    This was truly excellent. Beautifully written and exciting to read.

    So, Salazar was a git right from the beginning, huh? Godric and Rowena sound just perfect and Rowena a tad haughty in her glorious beauty.

    Can't wait to see what happens next.

    Lesley~
Title: Chapter 1 11 May 2009 9:22 pm
Reviewer: Rachel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Are you planning to finish Slave Child? You have more than one story not finished.

    Author's Response: Yes, I do plan to finish SC and I am aware of the unfinished stories.  Still, I have 5 completed stories to my credit, which is not a bad record.  I did say that my other projects would be on a short hiatus because I wanted to participate in the Challenge Fest.  I am currently working on the next chapter for SC.  Pair of Phoenixes will be updated afterwards.  I did warn everyone on PoP that updates would be sporadic.  As for Potions Professor, I plan to get back to it one day, but I'm not making any promises.  The SC chapter should be up within a few days.  
Title: Chapter 1 11 May 2009 8:34 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Both parts of this chapter are amazing. I really love how you depicted Harry and described his emotions as he headed down to his doom in Snape's office. Then Snape's office and Snape himself were very realistically depicted. But even better was the conversation between the Hogwarts founders. You had little to no canon to go on so your development of their characters was superb. I like them all and have never been able to say that in any other story. They all have very believable personalities and reasons for doing what they do. I like the reason you came up with for Slytherin's leaving. Very good!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much, Kim!  Your encouragement means a lot to me!  I have to admit though that long before I began actually writing in the HP world, I used to read the discussion forums on the old Sugar Quill site and there was some talk about the Founders, their personalities and motives and all, and I probably drew on that when creating them here.  I know I've had impressions of what they were like in my mind for some time.  The one I'm most uncertain about is Salazar Slytherin.  I may have made him too nice.  I can't forget that in canon he had the basilisk put in the castle...but he was true and close friends with the other founders at the beginning, so there has to be something more to him.  Maybe he had other reasons for the basilisk than wanting to harm innocent kids.  I sure hope so. 
Title: Chapter 1 11 May 2009 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! This is great Kristeh. Then again, I knew that it WOULD be!

    Ooh, I can't wait to see what adventure await Snape and Harry in the founders' time-line.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Pandora!

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