Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 3 20 May 2009 6:32 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape's a bit paranoid, isn't he? He has reason to though and I'm sure he's more than a little stressed out at this point. I'm curious: are we going to see the items of the founders in this tale? I think there would be something really ironic about seeing Helga drinking out of her cup and Rowena wearing the diadem. Then, poor Harry would have a serious feeling of deja vu down the line, lol.

    This is very well-written.

    -P.G.
Title: Chapter 3 13 May 2009 4:54 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, now they've gotten into a mess. Hope they find Salazar soon, a medieval forest is not a safe place to be in, there are a lot of dangerous animals in there, like wild boars and things.
Title: Chapter 3 12 May 2009 1:22 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice to see Snape not treating Harry like he is a bad smell. Well, the ungainly elephant dig was a bit mean...but very funny.

    Lesley~
Title: Chapter 3 11 May 2009 8:41 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    It would seem the Trelawney genes have devolved. I like this one much better! Your Snape is intelligent and his actions perfect for the scene. I love it!

    Author's Response:

    >>>It would seem the Trelawney genes have devolved.

    LOL, yeah, you could say that.  Canon Trelawney has always seemed rather a tragic figure to me though, or at least sympathetic. 

     

Title: Chapter 3 11 May 2009 7:50 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad to see that Harry is a little more restrained. Biting back retorts cannot be easy, when Snape provokes him.

    Snape is so snarkey, isn't he? I love it! You've really kept Snape and Harry in character. I think that this is ANOTHER story that would be a great sequel! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you again!  Yeah, Harry is restrained and it isn't easy...but he may just be feeling overwhelmed by all that's happened, too.  I know I would be.  I'm happy you think they're both in-character!  I don't know about a sequel, but I would like to maybe re-write this some day because it could have easily been a much longer story.  But if I ever do, it won't be anytime soon cause I've enough else going on right now, what with my other stories.

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