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Title: Epilogue 12 May 2009 2:02 pm
Reviewer: Marj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked your story very much. I find I enjoy the "back in time" stories. Thank you for writing!
Title: Epilogue 12 May 2009 12:50 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah..lovely. Ron and Hermione have even accepted Harry's changed circumstances and the person responsible for those changes. And you did it all without turning DD into a bad guy. Yay for you.

    Thank God Umbridge got her comeuppance.

    Very nice story. Thank you.

    Lesley~
Title: Epilogue 12 May 2009 7:10 am
Reviewer: Brandy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow...that is quite a unique twist! It was definitely a treat to see 7 chapters worth of a story, that must have been so much to write in that time yikes!

    Anyways, I loved the story-line with Salazar, and the four founders-not many people choose to venture to their time, and I liked seeing Salazar in a different light. It was also interesting seeing Harry and Snape in more of an "adventure" setting, I thought that built their relationship well. Fantastic job as usual!
Title: Epilogue 12 May 2009 5:38 am
Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed) [Report This]
    This was so sweet! What a nifty idea! I always love time travel fics, and yours was particularly enjoyable I loved your portrayal of Severus, and Harry was interestingly done as well!
    ~Frosty
Title: Epilogue 12 May 2009 4:45 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story Kristeh! This is definitely one creative and entertaining idea. I'm glad Harry and Severus could convince Sal to return to Hogwarts and reconsider the danger of muggleborns. I also love how he was written in a better light and your idea of that little girl was a good explanation for his views. I do have to wonder how the basilisk fits in with all this, but it’s not very important to the story.

    More good came from this too.; Harry and Sev's new understanding and relationship. Yet another bonus is Sirius is alive thanks to their success in Occlumency! *cheers* It's all good ^_^ hehe.

    P.S. Two things though; they never did speak with Godric, and Gamp’s Law of Transfiguration conflicts with Sev’s food conjuring. But, since it all worked out in the end and this is AU… *shrug*

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, I couldn't really reconcile the basilisk with this Salazar Slytherin either, unless it actually had some other purpose for being in the castle other than to destroy Muggleborns (Kind of a crazy way to go about that anyway, wasn't it?  Couldn't purebloods just as easily have been killed or petrified?  Does the basilisk distinguish between them or was it just that submissive to the Heir of Slytherin?).  So anyway, I just ignored the whole basilisk thing and didn't let it have anything to do with this story.  And yes, I was happy to let Sirius live, too.  Hmm, that could be an interesting idea for a story...Severus being Harry's guardian and Sirius being alive and having to deal with it, the two of them having to learn to adjust to their places in Harry's life...Well, maybe someday.  Yeah, the Godric bit was just a mistake on my part while Gamp's Law about the food was another thing I just decided to ignore.  It is an AU, after all, as you say!  
Title: Epilogue 12 May 2009 2:01 am
Reviewer: Adah (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this a lot! Great job! I can't wait for updates on any of your works.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I've just updated SC after too long of a break!
Title: Epilogue 11 May 2009 11:40 pm
Reviewer: FangsFawn (Signed) [Report This]
    Well-written...and what a fresh perspective! We usually see Snape finding out about Harry; not vice-versa. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, it does seem to happen the other way often, doesn't it?  Though Severus did find out more about Harry's old life, too, through his own dreams...I just didn't go into a lot of detail with that.  Thanks again!  I hope you have another chapter of your wonderful story "Tightrope" up soon, too, lol!  
Title: Epilogue 11 May 2009 11:00 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed that, Kristeh! But then, I always enjoy your stories, so no big suprise. :oP I think you wrote the Founders really well; I was impressed with your characterizations, especially as you had very little to go on from canon. And I liked Harry in this as well. He was very well written. I read your comments to Pandora about thinking you should have taken more time with it, but I don't think the story suffered at all. You wrote a very convincing and engaging story. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Tabitha!  I love your stories too, and did a little birdie tell me you're working on ch. 6 now?  I really hope so!
Title: Epilogue 11 May 2009 10:52 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think I would have been asking Sal if there was another way into the chamber beside the sink. You know a stairways of sort or something leading from Snape's quarters.

    Author's Response:

    LOL!  Yeah, Harry and Severus probably could have thought of all kinds of interesting questions for Salazar, if only they hadn't been in a hurry to get home...or if I hadn't been pushed for time!  

Title: Epilogue 11 May 2009 8:58 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh, warm fuzzies. I want more.

    I don't know why you said this wasn't your best. It was great! Any sequels in it's future? :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Pandora!  I'm really glad you liked it and am grateful.  I love the idea of the challenge, but I don't think I did it justice.  This could have easily been a much longer story, but since I was writing under a time constrainst, I felt that I rushed the solutions, that Salazar was too quickly persuaded and the whole Harry and Severus relationship was hurried, that it would have been better if I had taken more time to develop it a little more slowly.  They could have had many more adventures in the forest, and I originally planned for some other things to happen.  I'd planned for Severus to have to care for Harry when he was hurt, for the healing to take longer, or for it to go the other way and Severus to be the one who was hurt and for Harry to care for him.  I'd planned to have them talk more about their lives and slowly open up to one another.  I wanted there to be some little comment about Severus' greasy hair...for him to say that he knew he was ugly and that no one had ever cared for him so why should he bother, and have Harry to try to reassure him and say something about how he wasn't worried about looks, but that he did care about Severus, maybe even have Severus end with washing his hair.  None of that made it in because of time pressure and also I thought maybe the hair conversation could be interpreted as having romantic overtones which would be inappropriate for here.

    Well, anyway, as I said, I loved the whole challenge idea, but just felt that there was so much material there and I rushed things too much.  I probably won't write a sequel just because I've already got a lot on my plate when it comes to writing.  Thanks again!


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