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Reviews For A Strange Turn of Events
Author's Response: Thank you, Kim! I'm so happy you liked it!
This is a continuity problem. If you post it elsewhere, you might want to revise those chapters to take out that specification, or write a new chapter to include a conversation with Godric. Otherwise, it is a very nice quick read. Author's Response: Thank you! Yep...that bit about Harry and Severus returning home before speaking with Godric was the plot hole I referred to once on the shout box and wondered who would catch it. I originally intended to have Salazar return to Hogwarts with Harry and Sev and have Godric be there then. But I ran out of time while writing it. I meant to go back and change the earlier chapter, and have Helga and Rowena go to speak with Godric, but I was running late and in a hurry and forgot. I will go back and change it a bit before posting elsewhere.
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