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Title: Chapter 7 14 Jul 2009 5:10 am
Reviewer: redmal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good story. I loved the original parent trap. I would note that you have the boys born before they got married if their 11th birthday comes before their 11th anniversary. You may want to change it to 12th anniversary in this chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. I will change it when I go to beta the story.
Title: Chapter 7 20 Jun 2009 2:47 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. I'm surprised Snape was so forward about Lily, but it does seem clear that he misses her. I can't wait to read more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, PG! I hope that I am meeting your expectations for this challenge! (Thanks to Tabitha for doping me into... I mean, convincing me... to write a story for the Challenge Fest...) How I see it, is that "William" (Harry) just sorta caught Snape by surprise, and in a moment of grief, because it was Snape and Lily's wedding anniversary remember, Snape just got caught up in the memories and was more... thinking aloud than conciously replying.
Title: Chapter 7 18 Jun 2009 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, but very short.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I am sorry the chapters are so short, but the ones written and posted already were written at work on my lunch breaks. I am now out of work (hopefully short-term only) and have more time to dedicate to my writing. Enjoy the new chapter which will be up this week.
Title: Chapter 7 18 Jun 2009 5:27 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    So they're eleven. For some reason, I thought that they were older.

    I'm so glad that you've updated Kyle. I'm so looking forward to when they all meet. Now, THAT'S going to be fireworks! :)

    Author's Response: in the prologue it stated that Sev and Lily dropped off their 10-year-old sons, and their b-days were in july during camp
Title: Chapter 7 18 Jun 2009 2:32 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    snape doesnt talk about other child,harry.why? he doesnt know about harry or he doesnt want to him.

    Author's Response: Severus knows about both of his children (they are twins after all. It just hurts him to not be able to see both of his sons all the time.

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