Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 8 05 Aug 2009 7:28 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was sweet and funny, especially with the underwear. I never thought about boys arguing over underwear before, probably because I only have one brother and he got whatever clothes he wanted. My sisters on the other hand could start a war over make-up and hairstyles.

    I can't wait to see what happens with James. And I hope that Lily eventually forgives Sev.

    Author's Response: Well, when boys are regularly teased in situations where their underwear is visible (gym locker rooms, group camping, summer camps, boarding school, etc), and Harry is trying to get William into something (ie boxers and wife-beaters) that won't get him teased at Hogwarts. It is like you said about the make-up, except a bit more... manly. I hope to have a new chapter up soon, and you will find out what happens with James, Lily, Sev, and the boys.
Title: Chapter 8 25 Jul 2009 3:47 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I stumbled over this story today and like it quite a lot, though I'm from Germany and very well versed in the original storyline that you happen to copy quite a lot from - not that I mind... "Das doppelte Lottchen" is the original title in German and though it's to girls in that case your plot seems to develope quite a bit like it. But one question: Why did you put Snape into Amish county? I can't for the life of me see him there, even though he needed to get away from everything, the Amish aren't a concept of living I could ever imagine for him! Maybe you could explain your reasoning (i. e. Snape's) a bit more in the story?

    Author's Response: I placed Snape in Amish country, because I can't see him really being open to living in modern Muggle areas, and he wanted to get away from the Wizarding world for a while. I see him as living in the Amish area without being Amish himself.
Title: Chapter 8 13 Jul 2009 10:50 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol for the underwear part :) A nice chapter! Mila

    Author's Response: A nice review! Thanks, little-sun!
Title: Chapter 8 13 Jul 2009 7:57 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad that you've updated. That was hilarious about boxers vs. briefs. Too funny!

    I hope that if both William and Harry go to Hogwarts, that Sev and Lily will be forced to confront each other.

    I'm looking forward to the next chappie. Great job as usual Kyle! :)

    Author's Response: Obviously. they will be confronting each other before then...

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