Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 12 23 Aug 2009 1:28 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Where is chapter 12? You promised me a Snape rant! *likes Snape ranting*
    Yuck to Dudley's lack of pants *shudders* :)
    Mila

    Author's Response: It was more of him whining to himself. And I accidentally misnamed the chapter: 13 was 12. And Dudley had pants on, just no underwear... and in my story, he is active, playing soccer and such instead of loafing around, so he is thin...
Title: Chapter 12 23 Aug 2009 6:28 am
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chapter. love to see the longbottoms' reactions. wondering how the meet with sev and lily will go.... do update soon.
Title: Chapter 12 23 Aug 2009 3:41 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice, you write nagging parents very well, lol. The things they said sounded like they came straight from my mom's mouth. I'm loving the shock factor here too. Good work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: I just use the things I have heard from my own parents! Glad you like it!
Title: Chapter 12 23 Aug 2009 2:15 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OmG! I thought I would pee my pants with the saggy but, and commando comment.

    Frank's comment about the flea collar was too funny also.

    I'm looking forward to seeing Lily and Severus meet finally. Can't wait fo the next chappie. Good one Kyle! Or should I say TWO!

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