| Title: Chapter 13: Informing the Longbottoms
| 07 Sep 2009 5:35 am
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| Reviewer: Holly (Anonymous)
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Aw! You did stop at the most logical place, thus making a huge cliffhanger for the reader :) can't wait to read more. You do a pretty good job of keeping it nice and simple, a good easy read. Keep up the great work!
| Title: Chapter 13: Informing the Longbottoms
| 29 Aug 2009 3:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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What's nice about this story is that no one is dead, no one is insane, or in pain from the effects of cruatius, crucio or imperius and no one is calling Harry a freak, and starving him!! I love it. Oh and the fact that Dudley, Vernon and Petunia consider Harry family is nice too.
Nice chappie and I simply can't wait for Lily and Severus to meet.
| Title: Chapter 13: Informing the Longbottoms
| 29 Aug 2009 7:06 am
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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You're doing a very nice job with this story. I am really looking forward to Severus and Lily meeting. I feel bad for Severus; he seems very anxious.
| Title: Chapter 13: Informing the Longbottoms
| 29 Aug 2009 6:23 am
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| Reviewer: little-sun (Signed)
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Short short short :-( cannot wait for your James! M.
I love that Alice Laughed! And that she could pull strings to speed up the process. Can't wait to see Sev with Both Boys togeather.
V.
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