| Title: Chapter 14: Let's Get Freaky!
| 22 Sep 2009 1:03 am
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| Reviewer: antigonesev (Anonymous)
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I love, love your story! Although I must admit this chapter moved a bit quickly, especially with the cliffhanger, lol. Hopefully everything works out ;) as for the pairings, what about Ron or Draco? Slash is great, but a little limiting in some regards, LOL. Can't wait for your next update!
Not really surprising... I am looking forward to theznext chapter. M.
| Title: Chapter 14: Let's Get Freaky!
| 16 Sep 2009 3:06 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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How about Harry and Cedric? I like those two together for some reason. Cedric is mild mannered, considerate, and he's not flashy. He's a perfect compliment to Harry.
Oh, and Kyle.....YOU LEFT US WITH ANOTHER CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!
How could you leave us hanging again? :O
Okay, so that means lots of pokes coming your way!!!
Great chappie by the way. I love how Severus was so nervous, and was actually wondering what to wear!!!
Oh, and can "I" have a House Elf? I'm tired of doing housework, and having to figure out what to wear every day, when I have so few clothes.
Can you imagine? The snap of my little House Elf "Dawnie" and voilà, I've got something new to wear!!!
OKAY KYLE, SO...
POKE
POKE
POKE
POKE!!!
Nice chapter. I liked the part with Snape and the house elf giving him advise about what to wear and do. Now, the only question is if it will work? Will Lily find out about William next chapter? I can't wait to find out!
-P.G.
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